You are an awesome writer

I absolutely love this. Your writing style, your stories, and this one was... wonderful!
You've made me a LJ-fan, I must say. I love it. Wonderful. And I do hope Verity (she is a lovely girl) is in another story of yours, and I'm going to read them all, because you are a fantastic writer. I sat up until 7:14 AM (that's the time now) to read this thing. Gosh.. Once again, I love it. Both author and story's going to favorite!
Lee

hey!
i havent reviewed on this story before, but i want to say that it has been truly awesome and ive been hooked on it ever since i started reading it!
sorry for not reviewing each chapter separately, i was too eager to move on to the next chapter!
=]
its really quite genius and i love, love, love it!
congratulations!
i especially love your version of lily and all the other girls you invented!
im progressing to your other stories, please keep writing!
thank you for the awesome reading experience!
=]
x
wb

The End!

I really like the way it ended. I loved the "I'm sorry" speech Lily gave, I love that just like Alice said, James immediately forgave her.

I love how it ended sweetly and somehow anticlimatically but not really. It was a very normal thing and it was a good thing. I just loved that its normalacy balanced out the drama of the other chapters. It was a really great story!
Thanks for it!
:D melissaturkey

I was so surprised when Alice won, but then again I wasnt. It was a really strange feeling.

When I began reading this and all the way up to the last chapter I believed Lily would win. Not because she deserved it, because really if I was honest she didnt try her hardest to begin with and she wanted to win to do soemthing she could have done at anytime: just ask James out and tell him how she feels.

Honestly in every chapter the person I wanted to win changed. I'm really really glad Alice won. Alice needed it as a confidence booster, to be able to see herself as a strong person in her own right, but I can't help but be really really shocked. I was so sure Lily would win just because shes Lily.

But I really really like this ending, I like who won and I love this chap, I really like how some of the girls came back and were able to act as judges, it was cool.
Amazing story!
Now the only question is: where does this leave James and Lily?
:D melissaturkey

"They’re only people – idiots, at that – and yet look at what they inspire in people. Look at what they inspire in themselves.

They aren’t afraid of what the world could do to them, of consequences, of the idea that what they are doing is completely wrong. They aren’t afraid to shine or get what they want. They aren’t afraid to live, break their own boundaries and rebuild them, exploring their own capabilities to cope, to deal, to love.

Of course they screw things up, but despite everything, they’re pure. Sirius tells James something in his ear and James laughs a real laugh, the fleeting, casual joy somehow as intense as if he cried."

Once again I'm using an exerpt from the story to say what I feel about the chapter! Part of the reason I love your stories so much is that they're so honest. And after this whole ordeal where we've spent time getting to know all the personalities of all these girls who are competeing against eachother for these boys' attentions its good to step back and look at them and why these girls are doing this. Mostly because its about the girls themselves now, its not about the boys anymore, but seeing them like this is nice. It brings it full circle to why anyone whould want to do somehting like this in the first place.
Great chapter!
:D melissaturkey

"so who is right for him? Someone who knows him, who keeps him interested, who plays his games and knows exactly how to annoy him. Someone like you.”

I had a little hiatus in reading this story, or any story on ffnet and now that I'm back, I had to pick this story up again, so of course after this chap I had to review, cause ya know my opinion is SO important! lol jk

Anyway, that statement I think sums up everything about the reason perfect Lily and James are for eachother, it just really brought everything together in the moment Sadie said it.

It was the perfect way to approach Lily and a nice change next to all your other stories where Alice or someother friend feels like they have to bombard Lily with exclamations of "You LOVE him!"'s and "You just dont want to SEE it!"'s. It was refreshing and different and gentler and I think Sadie was the one to do it. I really liked it.
Great chapter!
:D melissaturkey

Hooray!
As you put it I am a Lucille hater and am very happy to have "Lucy" go, that was probably my favorite chapter so far.
Cheers. It's2dark2read.

This was SO good. I was incredibly skeptical going in, because how many crossovers like this turn out well? But you stayed surprisingly true to the books, while still making it extremely entertaining ...

First of all, your OC development was great, and, in a competition where all the girls are models, it would be so easy to go into Mary Sue territory ... but you really didn't. I loved Alicia to bits, really enjoyed the first chapter from Lucille's POV, and adored Hannah. Sadie grew on me by the end too :) Really nice job with all the girls!

And thank you, THANK YOU for giving Peter an honest part in the story, space in the Marauder's banter, a girl who likes him, a way with the camera ... :D I hate when people writing Hogwarts L/J hate him as an adult, so don't write him as a kid. I loved your other Marauders as well; Sirius, in particular, was very entertaining :)

Somehow, you managed to make this a believable L/J too! I admit, at the beginning I didn't like your Lily very much, but when she mellowed out a bit she began to grow on me, and I really did love the intense passion you gave her. She and your James, too, had great chemistry.

Anyway, really really great story - thanks so much for sharing!
-Crescent

Hey you! I finally managed to read this story and well I just wanted to thank you...it was pretty entertaining...not the best of your stories but I had a fun time reading it. But there´s one little critic...Alice choice of clothing is a bit weird...she´s wearing a short skirt and sandals...hello? a few lines above that thing you wrote that it was snowing outside...hope you´ll change that, cause it just don´t make sense. Best wishes, Lily

Wow. I'll be honest with you, I've been on this site for a few years, and every time this story came up in my searches, I would be annoyed, even if it was written by you. Don't get me wrong, I love your writing, but the idea of a story based on "America's next top Model" did not sound that great. But it seems to be a favourite, so I gave it a shot.

You, my friend, have a gift most people wish they had. I was trying to find something bad with this story, like, seriously trying, and I could not. You're very good at what you do, that much is obvious from all of your stories I have previously read, and this is no exception. You stayed in character, for all characters, and you made it seem very real. Real in the sense that it wasn't all perfect and happily ended. It was a realistic ending, and i liked that.

Another thing I liked was that you gave Peter a life. He's not my favourite character, and most stories I read have him there just because his name makes the Marauders complete. But you included him with the group, and you did it impressively. You should consider, if you have not already, writing a book. or books, whatever suits your fancy. You write remarkably well, and if I can safely say i would buy your books :)

To end my extremely long letter of a review, Keep up the awesome work! and Good luck with all your future stories!

I LOVE THIS STORY!



Caitlin xx

Hey!

So, first of all, I want to apologize for not reviewing any of the other chapters- I was too excited to see what happened next.
I can't remember what all my thoughts were on the chapters, but I do know that I was very much in love with this story and most of it's characters. And even the ones I didn't like (coughcoughLucilleandRosalinecough) had amazing character and were very realistic. Their snobbery made me quite angry, though. xD
As soon as Sadie left, I was fairly certain that Alice would win (yeah, it took me that long... I'm so slow. xD), but my stomach still curled up in little knots. Even now, at the end of the last chapter, the knots haven't fully un-knotted.
The ending wasn't quite what I expected, but only because it ended on a little quieter note than I'm used to for most LJ stories. But it was realistic, and I do like that. :)
You're a fantastic writer! Great job!

This is an absolutely astonishing story! It was very interesting to read all the fihts and mischief that you could come up with! This is definitly going on my favourites list! I am glad that Lily said sorry to James but what is going to happen between Alice and Frank? Have you written any stories about that couple? If you do i would like to read them.
Blue...

I really love this series. it is very lol!