I LOVED this! Goodness! It's perfect! It's... going to my fav list!

Wonderful job. _ It's kinda sad to think what all the hero would have to live through if he didn't get the "happy ending." This tale seems to accurately portray how one may act after being left all alone, unable to join those they hold most dear until one had arrived able to grant them their eternal peace. Luca seems perfect for the job. Again, great job!

beautiful, just beautiful! thank you

This is just like a famous Greek tragedy, or something to that effect. The hero dies of his own accord. This was beautiful. It made me want to shout at McDohl for wanting to die so badly, and yet grant him his most desperate wish. Only depend on Luca Blight to be able to do a deed like that...okay, I'm going to cry now. Excuse me.

This is one of the best Suikoden stories I've read! I simply adore Luca and McDohl, they're two of my favorite characters. Keep up the good work and write more fics like this one.

wow...this is such a good fic...one of the best i've read in the site...

An epic of Lord McDohl with Luca Blight. -I'd stop being such a critic now and review properly! Okay, the story sinopsis seems fine, very smooth! However, to be given the role of an unpercieved spectator The boy was in Banner. To get to the battlefield unseen is possible, but why, when he had already given up on life itself? Overall, the words of this piece of fantasy comes out smoothly with a twist of melancholic tang... beautiful. There is absolutely no drawback on this story, not even romance, and I must commend you for that, though there are many hints possible, but impossible for a straight coupling. (No, romance is NOT a drawback, but it is for death fictions The love for death is clearly written. A scary thought, but unique nonetheless. I wish to recommend you on your job well done! ...Well done!

Oh, I just wanted to give you one more idea without having to prepare the spoiler spaces on the list... uh, for Luca, the other sentence is "Die, you spineless worms!" and he likes hacking at innocent people while at it... Except for his dad ... Did that help? o_0

This story was written beautifully, and seems very promising.

I'll be waiting for the next chapter. Good luck.

Wow, this seems like a really great beginning to what could become one of the best written fics on this page. You're writing style is beautiful, and i hope you choose to continue this. Keep writing, you have a fan here!

Very impressive! I hope you continue with this, I really like it! -

yea i look forward to this anything todo with the McDohl household i like

Looking very nice so far...

Oops! I made a terrible mistake on the flowers! Sorry! ...But I love madmen, because I'm a madman too... XDXDXD