 fcajoymartin 2009-11-05 . chapter 23I like the alternate ending much better b/c I am a happy ending kind of girl. With good writing I get REALLY emotionally involved in the story-so had I not had the alternate ending I would have been depressed until I read a happy B&E story, lol-so I am thankful for the alternate ending. By saying that I am praising your writing-you do a great job with emotional angst. I just have to have a happy ending or it seriously effects me, lol. So thank you for the happy ending! :D |
 fcajoymartin 2009-11-05 . chapter 22This story kept my attention-but I have to say I really hated it. I am glad you did an alternate ending and mabye that will make it all better. |
 fcajoymartin 2009-11-05 . chapter 16I like the idea of Annabelle being attracted to Jasper...and I like the fact that Edward thinks he would choose a vampire Bella over a vampire Annabelle. I want to like Edward-so I hope he chooses Bella. The way Carlisle is making excuses for Edward disappoints me. |
 fcajoymartin 2009-11-05 . chapter 13Still heart wrenching. Why can't the entire family move to the other side of the world? I know it is a story and for them to do that it wouldn't be a story, lol. But if that were really the situation that is what should happen...I am glad Em and Rose are staying with her. |
 fcajoymartin 2009-11-05 . chapter 9This has got to be the most heart wrenching story I have ever read. Like it seriously makes me depressed and want to cry. I am seriously hoping this has a happy ending-and I hope it gets happy fast although I don't think it will. |
 marie1976 2009-11-02 . chapter 23ok the first ending was sad and i really didnt like it that much i like the happy endings i love the alternate ending i thank it was the best |
 bells254 2009-11-01 . chapter 5Um i kinda hate you right now cuz you made me cry :'(
I swear im crying right now!
I feel soo much pain and i feel just so sad...so thanks for making me cry :(
that means your doing a good job but i hate to cry : ( |
 treehs 2009-10-28 . chapter 10freaking awesome. |
 smartassblondie 2009-09-23 . chapter 22this is exactly how i felt this story should end, it was perfect in it's own way, and thank you for not following the generalisation of a happily ever after bella/edward story.
the story is brilliant and is definately one of the best i have ever read, keep on writing, and great job,
SMassBLDi xox |
 jbirchard 2009-09-20 . chapter 23i know you dont care, but this ending was much better. thanks again, and i look forward to reading more of your stories. |
 jbirchard 2009-09-20 . chapter 22i have to say i am dissapointed, i expected a happy ending, thats why i continued to read this sad sad sad sad story, oh well, im going to read the alternate ending now |
 jbirchard 2009-09-20 . chapter 21i cant stop crying |
 jbirchard 2009-09-20 . chapter 20who was he with now, if notr annabelle? whoa, whats happening |
 jbirchard 2009-09-20 . chapter 18there i go crying again. it hit me when she was looking at the wedding album, and edward caught her. how can she forgive him, i dont think i would be able to. i cant believe she is going to go to school, i wonder whats going to happen? |
 jbirchard 2009-09-20 . chapter 15ooh it sounds like he is really trying, but i am still alittle nervous of whats going to happen. i also add a few of your stories to my favs and will be reading thoes when i am done with this one and the other ones im in the middle of right now. i do think you are very talented and i appreciate you sharing your stories. |