 NekoDoodle 2009-03-09 . chapter 1Princess... I like Sparky. ^^ |
 CinnamonStuff 2009-02-12 . chapter 1Aww, love it of course! There's never enough Toko ;)
You did a great job, I really liked your writing, except in the part where Zuko told about his past. It looked a bit like you let him ramble it off..
But, great story, thank you!
Xx |
 Xioa Rose 2008-11-26 . chapter 1 Im too lazy to login >.< Anyways great story, Love to see more of this kind of thing. TOKO rules, but Im more of a Yaoi person so I like Zukaang. ANYWAYS on a further note, you did okay keeping in character but it could have been made a bit better. Zuko would probably snap a bit at any snide comments. And Toph's just not all that sentimental |
 Dutch92 2008-07-06 . chapter 1I love it! I always love Zuko and Toph friendship stories and yours is just perfect! |
 Princess Tyler Briefs 2008-05-22 . chapter 1I like it! I like that Toph can "see" so much. It always pleases me in the show, and you did a great job here. Way too many writers forget that Toph is blind, and I liked that Zuko didn't know but she made it quite clear after, didn't she :D? |
 rooch24 2008-05-15 . chapter 1I rather liked the story, well enough to hope you might continue it? I would really like to see where you might take this |
 Here Comes The Moon's Violin 2008-05-01 . chapter 1This was sweet. I'm starting to like Platonic Toko more than romantic, and this story definitely convinces me.^^
Love this story!
Sokka and Zuko's Stalker
An Assassin's Violin |
 Zenjamin 2008-04-12 . chapter 1Love it. here's hoping you continue.
we need more toko |
 Arual 2008-03-23 . chapter 1 Nicely put.
I usually decide in a couple paragraphs whether or not a story sounds believable and true to the characters so good job for keeping my interest. I always thought that Zuko and Toph would be quick to get along, loved Toph's cute nicknames for everyone and thought it would be interesting to see her "see" someone with her hands.
Please continue. I'll keep reading. |
 TBC 2008-02-28 . chapter 1 I think this could have been a scene from avatar great job |
 SupportSeverusSnape 2008-02-25 . chapter 1Aw. Zuko. I like the whole Toph feeling the scar. It's...I dunno. Just really cool. |
 MastaDrumma22 2008-02-05 . chapter 1The beginning description was lovely (A word I don't use at all, but you get the point). The part where Zuko tells Toph his story should have been more descriptive, and more heart-wrenching. The scar on his face plagued him for how long? Well, sorry for the rant. Your story was good, especially the beginning. |
 fourfourfourfour 2008-02-05 . chapter 1this was really good! just about the best hunk of toko on XD i bet that there's like akatrillithousand zutara fics like this at this point, but it just sounds better with toph! |
 KurukiXV 2008-02-05 . chapter 1Me loved it. I ship Tokka but the "Toph feeling Zuko's scar' idea is quite original in my opinion. Shoo gets KUDOS! |
 TwilightG 2008-02-05 . chapter 1loved it. |