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NekoDoodle
2009-03-09 . chapter 1
Princess... I like Sparky. ^^
CinnamonStuff
2009-02-12 . chapter 1
Aww, love it of course! There's never enough Toko ;)
You did a great job, I really liked your writing, except in the part where Zuko told about his past. It looked a bit like you let him ramble it off..
But, great story, thank you!

Xx
Xioa Rose
2008-11-26 . chapter 1
Im too lazy to login >.< Anyways great story, Love to see more of this kind of thing. TOKO rules, but Im more of a Yaoi person so I like Zukaang. ANYWAYS on a further note, you did okay keeping in character but it could have been made a bit better. Zuko would probably snap a bit at any snide comments. And Toph's just not all that sentimental
Dutch92
2008-07-06 . chapter 1
I love it! I always love Zuko and Toph friendship stories and yours is just perfect!
Princess Tyler Briefs
2008-05-22 . chapter 1
I like it! I like that Toph can "see" so much. It always pleases me in the show, and you did a great job here. Way too many writers forget that Toph is blind, and I liked that Zuko didn't know but she made it quite clear after, didn't she :D?
rooch24
2008-05-15 . chapter 1
I rather liked the story, well enough to hope you might continue it? I would really like to see where you might take this
Here Comes The Moon's Violin
2008-05-01 . chapter 1
This was sweet. I'm starting to like Platonic Toko more than romantic, and this story definitely convinces me.^^

Love this story!

Sokka and Zuko's Stalker

An Assassin's Violin
Zenjamin
2008-04-12 . chapter 1
Love it. here's hoping you continue.
we need more toko
Arual
2008-03-23 . chapter 1
Nicely put.
I usually decide in a couple paragraphs whether or not a story sounds believable and true to the characters so good job for keeping my interest. I always thought that Zuko and Toph would be quick to get along, loved Toph's cute nicknames for everyone and thought it would be interesting to see her "see" someone with her hands.
Please continue. I'll keep reading.
TBC
2008-02-28 . chapter 1
I think this could have been a scene from avatar great job
SupportSeverusSnape
2008-02-25 . chapter 1
Aw. Zuko. I like the whole Toph feeling the scar. It's...I dunno. Just really cool.
MastaDrumma22
2008-02-05 . chapter 1
The beginning description was lovely (A word I don't use at all, but you get the point). The part where Zuko tells Toph his story should have been more descriptive, and more heart-wrenching. The scar on his face plagued him for how long? Well, sorry for the rant. Your story was good, especially the beginning.
fourfourfourfour
2008-02-05 . chapter 1
this was really good! just about the best hunk of toko on XD i bet that there's like akatrillithousand zutara fics like this at this point, but it just sounds better with toph!
KurukiXV
2008-02-05 . chapter 1
Me loved it. I ship Tokka but the "Toph feeling Zuko's scar' idea is quite original in my opinion. Shoo gets KUDOS!
TwilightG
2008-02-05 . chapter 1
loved it.
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