Oh wow, that was really touching in a sharp sort of way. Like the way you can't really escape the sensation of a knife in you side. I miss reading your writing, it makes my heart ache.

beautifully-written.short and yet a lot better than most fics. kudos.

Oh, wow. Ouch.

I know that feeling, and it's weird and terrifying to have to remind yourself that you love the person you're in love with. Beautiful.

oh I liked that! You said an awful lot in only a few words

whoa. that was cool. something about it just made sense. i like it. :)

Well hello stranger - thought you'd abandoned us?
Like this piece it is real xx

aw...:P

I see this coming in the Andy/Allison relationship. A kind of on-and-off thing from Andy. And I think this perfectly captures it. You did a wonderful job.

that's me
ahhelga
aka Pauline