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| PinkSander 2008-03-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really like this story, I think what mad it more believable was the fact that you kept it in McKay's POV, so when he lost consciousness, we got jostled about, as much as his mind. Well done! I look forward to reading more from you. |
| Wolfen Moondaughter 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseHey, stranger! ;) A gal I know at Helwett's board pointed us to a bunch of ROdney whump links, and I said "Hey! Sholio! I know that name!!" so I came over right away. *G* I really need to check your lj more often. Yay for tasty Rodney-whump and McShepness!! :D I so less-than-three you! |
| SaJi 2008-03-17 ch 1, | abuseAw..I loved it. Very nice. |
| Pocus 2008-03-15 ch 1, | abuseThis was fantastic. Loved the character interaction. It was perfect. You really have the voices down. I think this is my favorite line of the whole thing though "In what universe," he managed to say through stiff, unresponsive lips, "is that not a stupid idea?" It is so perfectly Rodney. |
| The Love of a Lie 2008-03-11 ch 1, | abuseAw...Shep and Rodney squashed together on an ice shelf. Made me tingle. Very sweet story. |
| nebbyJen 2008-03-07 ch 1, | abuseI really, really love this little story. So, I have to read it wrapped in a blanket because of sympathy chills... that just means you've conveyed the freezing temperature and being stuck so wonderfully. As always, another great fic! |
| MKofGod 2008-03-03 ch 1, | abusePoor Rodney. He shouldn't worry John so. Lol... Great story! Definately looking forward to reading and rereading your work. |
| ValleyA 2008-03-01 ch 1, | abuseYou always remind me why I love the fic in this fandom. Wonderful characterizations, the voices so true. It's a pleasure to read your stuff again. Keep writing! |
| Space1Traveler 2008-02-20 ch 1, | abuseThis, I liked. |
| Denouement Intrusion 2008-02-16 ch 1, | abuseOh I loved this. But then again, look who wrote it. Pure genius, capturing both Sheppard and McKay perfectly. Tense and tight and snarky and worrisome...the image of Shep free climbing down to McKay using his knives is an arresting visual. Sheppard's growing distress as he listens to Rodney not-so-slowly freezing to death is palpable. Rodney is just, well, Rodney, perfectly in character. Maybe I'm being a little stupid (it is 5 am and Ive been up since thursday) but WHAT was it Shep realized as he felt McKay's pulse - that he was dying or that he was NOT dying? The tone of the piece rather suggested the former to me, but I'd really like to know if that's what you intended, purely because I'm curious. There's nothing to complain or nag about here - this is just sheer perfection in all aspects, a brilliant-cut gem that goes straight to favorites. My congrats. |
| LilRicki 2008-02-13 ch 1, | abuseOoh, yay! Nice h/c. :-) Thanks for the story! -LilRicki (aka Pansy Chubb) |
| mary deveau 2008-02-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseAwesome story. Angsty with a sense of humor. Love the snark and the concern that McKay and Sheppard have for one another. The banter you wrote between McKay and Sheppard was perfect. Thanks for sharing. |
| meredithmk 2008-02-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseI don't usually leave reviews (ashamed of my English), but I thought that you deserved a big thanks and some congratulations. This is one of the best one shot I've read so far (and I have read a lot...). The way you picture the whole scene makes it living, colorful ; the characterization is perfect and the dialogues so real. |
| ManicTater 2008-02-07 ch 1, | abuseThat was wonderful. I just loved the back-and-forth between John and Rodney. |
| LadyNiko 2008-02-06 ch 1, | abuseHehehehe... I totally cracked up at Rodney's hand signals at the end. :) Good job and again, great show of friendship between those two. Write more, soon, please? *g* |