Awesome story. I absolutely loved it. Great characterization.

Love this story! I keep coming back to it. Nice descriptions of what's happening, I can picture it while reading :-) And of course, who can resist some Rodney whump and Sheppard to the rescue! *added to favs*

Very effective writing. I was right there with them.

Aw! Beautiful!

If I got to put my hand under Sheppard's shirt, I think I'd be more than happy to stay awake...haha. Loved the story, good job.

Awesome story. Amazing. It was a pleasure to read.

LOL! This is really funny. I can really see Sheppard doing this.

Lol! So sweet and aw! One of my favorite shorts. Wonderful story, loved how you used Rodney's POV in this one.

This is such a good story, I love to read it when I need a Rodney Whump fix.

I really like this story, I think what mad it more believable was the fact that you kept it in McKay's POV, so when he lost consciousness, we got jostled about, as much as his mind. Well done! I look forward to reading more from you.

Hey, stranger! ;) A gal I know at Helwett's board pointed us to a bunch of ROdney whump links, and I said "Hey! Sholio! I know that name!!" so I came over right away. *G* I really need to check your lj more often. Yay for tasty Rodney-whump and McShepness!! :D I so less-than-three you!

Aw..I loved it. Very nice.

This was fantastic. Loved the character interaction. It was perfect. You really have the voices down. I think this is my favorite line of the whole thing though

"In what universe," he managed to say through stiff, unresponsive lips, "is that not a stupid idea?"

It is so perfectly Rodney.

Aw...Shep and Rodney squashed together on an ice shelf. Made me tingle. Very sweet story.

I really, really love this little story. So, I have to read it wrapped in a blanket because of sympathy chills... that just means you've conveyed the freezing temperature and being stuck so wonderfully. As always, another great fic!