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lessxordinary
2008-09-06 . chapter 4
Gotta say, I adore the 4th drable. Absolutely hilarious; totally caught me off guard. Because Reno tends to do that. XD
lessxordinary
2008-09-06 . chapter 3
These are good...
But I have aboslutely no idea who half the characters are.
Please! Use names! XD
Or at least put them in the summary. Or use descriptions.
Only pronouns make me cry.

Still, good job; you have a way with dialogue.
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