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Lientjuhh
2009-09-27 . chapter 1
Nice.. I like it.. Well done on THE epilogue of the story.. :)
SevsMoonChild
2009-04-18 . chapter 1
From too much love of living,
From hope and fear set free,
We thank with brief thanksgiving
Whatever gods may be
That no man lives for ever;
That dead men rise up never;
That even the weariest river
Winds somewhere safe to sea.
-The Garden of Proserpine

One of my greatest fears is immortality. The idea of never finding peace from this life scares me to death. I do love this series though. I like the way this wrapped things up. Still, I would have liked it a whole lot better if Harry had found peace as well.
Gondegoogoo
2009-04-08 . chapter 1
Interesting. So Harry turned into a phoenix permanently? That was a sad ending! But I suppose it is for the better, because he can use his tears to cure people, and be a good familiar to a good person like Albus.
LadyWolfRider
2008-11-22 . chapter 1
beautiful haunting and very sad
salixshadow
2008-08-11 . chapter 1
this had me balling my eyes out. i love the way your stories connect with the emotions of the reader. very good.
mikaylex
2008-07-08 . chapter 1
I've spent the last 3 days re-reading the entire series and you are a brilliant writer. The story was facinating and captivating; it was well planned and expressed beautifully.

Whilst personally I'd probably have been happy to have never had to read about their deaths. This story was the perfect epilogue to an incredible journey.

And I absolutely love HPCW fics, I just cannot believe how rare they are. So thank you so much for this.

xx
M
hemotem
2008-06-16 . chapter 1
Ahh a great ending to the series thank you.


Hemotem
vairetwilight
2008-03-22 . chapter 1
That was so sad. I read the series ages ago and hadnt realised you put anything else up. I really love it. I always felt so bad for harry, in your stories, that he was immortal and would never move on that we know of. That was really good. Be very proud
CaramelBoost
2008-03-21 . chapter 1
Aww, that was sad. But fluffy. Am I making sense ? I don't like the idea of Charlie and Harry dieing.. well, pretty much Charlie, but still. It's heartbreaking. Really well-written, as usual.

xx Carrie
Greywolf25
2008-03-17 . chapter 1
*Wipes away a tear and blows nose noisily* I have to say, several times, your 'Unlocking Harry' series has moved me to tears, but 'the last burning day' well, let's just say it left me in a blubbering heap on the floor. Excellently written, loved all pairings, (there just isn't enough Charlie and Harry) Moving onto the 'Healing' series now. *Blows nose again* :)
DyingInnocence
2008-02-13 . chapter 1
This is really good. You mentioned all the people that were close to Harry dying except for Ron and Hermoine. Obviously they are dead but it might be a good idea to mention their passings too.
nljfs
2008-02-08 . chapter 1
swet -- nice epilog & recap.
Dizi 85
2008-02-06 . chapter 1
absolutly beautiful. well done! WOHO
supergirl3684
2008-02-05 . chapter 1
that was beautiful!! I do wish you'd do another long fic for the 'unlocking harry potter' saga but you ended it so well that I can't beg for another! :) Great story! I hope you write more fics!
rosiegirl
2008-02-05 . chapter 1
That was beautiful and amazing! I'm trying not to cry here, the family would make fun of me! Wow, excellent as always. Wish Harry could leave sooner to be back with his loved ones. So alone he must be. More from Harry's point of view, perhaps at his end with the joyous reunion at the end? Pretty please?!
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