this is a good story (not to keen on male/male slash) I think this would have been a better story if SG1 had to fight the system to get custody of Daniel child with out breaking secrecy hope you update soon all the same

nice

please update real soon. i mean REAl SOON. plz

Oh my god, this is so good! This has got to be one of the best stories I've ever read! D

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please continue this story its really good. i liked jacks surprise at jackie knowing who he is. i would love to read more:)

Great story, I hope you write more!

please continue writing. this story is absolutely amazing

Oh dear, this is great!

I love this story!

I really hope that Jack can take Jackie with him without too much of a hassle from the authorities. I really really hope so.

And that was an evil place to stop the chapter, I want to read more of Jack's and Jackie's interaction!

Aww come on please I've been waiting forever for the update. I really need to know how their going to explain it and if Danny's going to show up once and a while.

Great story, please update again really, really soon)

NO!

You're so mean leaving it there!*Sigh
Oh well all in all this is a freakin awesome story!

Please update when you can and take care!

enjoyed reading this and wonder if you are gona complete it, love to find out what happens between sam and tony, gibbs and lesie and also what jack and the little girl will do.

Oh this is so cute. Can we have more, please? It's so sweet, and you write it so well. Looking forward to more. Keep writing!

Excellent story! I like the way you've handled the crossover, and all the characters seem right on. I hope you'll continue the story.

Great job. Very well written. I am enjoying it so far. Please update soon. I look foward to reading the rest.