Hey! Sorry it took me so long to review! I tried on Wednesday, but FanFiction decided to be a real pain. I couldn't load hardly any pages at all this whole week (including for reading). Anyways, on to what matters:

I'm glad you decided to go ahead with this after the oneshot you did earlier! The story through the eyes of the Sangheili is a great take on Halo that, personally, I really like. I'm especially fond of the way you intro each chapter (Ship Master's log, ID#, etc). It just starts it all out very detailed and very structured. I've found very few spelling and punctuation things (thank you for that! You have no idea how hard it is to find). All in all, I can't wait to read more of out this! Thanks!

- Raptor

This is gotta be the coolest story I've ever read...then again I love Halo alot! this is a great story...having Halo 3 from an Elite POV is genius! Update soon please!


(This is freaking AWESOME I so did not know I could review my own story!)

Cool reference to First Strike (the last good Halo novel, IMO). Good chapter, and I totally know what you're talking about with college finals. They really suck! ;-)

Good start. It's interesting to see a story from a first-person Elite POV. Hope to see more soon, since I'm looking for a new good Halo fic to read ;-)

This seems interesting, I'll keep reading. I like it so far.

~Dark Oak's BubbleBuddy

This is a great start to what may be a wonderful story. I give it 2 thumbs up. An update is needed asap. Please. I hate being in suspence.