Great fic Guardian, can't wait to see what happens next. Wonder what will happens when that sword of Heather's is drawn.

Oh dear, I wonder why they're after Irma? A lot of people are after Irma, lately o.O;; Eh, wonder why Natalee is so hesitant; she's in Meridian, lots of different races mingle there daily. What could she possibly be? And I wonder if they'll ever give their parents and these White people the appropriate beating that they deserve? At least the Guardians know that the Shadow Guardians are good, will Natalee tell the Shadow Guardians the truth about the normal ones?

Definitly likin' it. Glade to see that you haven't been eaten by Anophellei.

Heh, G L, long time no read, man. Love ch 6. Why does everybody pick on Irma? Poor girl's gonna get a complex. Well, another complex. Some things just can't be helped, I guess. ;D Catch ya on the flipside, so don't get caught in the downslide, A J.

Whoa...so now the WITCH girls know that the SHINE girls aren't evil, that's good, right? And I'm sure once the SHINE girls get to know the WITCH girls, they'll be okay too, right? Well, it'll probably be a while, but I wanna know if Heather, Esper, and Ichi are okay :( Will Heather finally get even with the bitch with the whip? I hope so; update again really, really soon! XD

Well, that was a bit of a dark chapter old boy. Dark but good. Well done. Kdh.

OK, this was excellent. I liked Heather with her sister's death, and Esper running away from her parents while in a car. I really liked Ichi's story just because it hit me smack in the gut. Who in their right mind would treat a human being like a dog? Again, good work. Keep it up.

Great Story!!

OUCH! Hay Lin's reaction says it for all of us, G L. Hopefully, these girls will become better than their pasts have tried to make them. (Hey, wait! they already have, huh?) Can't wait to see who you find to be Earth and Water. Catch ya on the flipside, A J.

An acrobat who ran AWAY from the circus, a child genius, and some poor abused girl. (So far.) Something tells me the other two shadow Guardians are bound to be just as interesting. (Votes for Alchemy, anybody?) Catch ya on the flipside, G L, so don't get caught in the downslide.
A J

Dude, this is sweet. I loved it. Ice is so much of a badass it isn't even funny. I love how in character the WITCH guardians are. You did great. Setting up the greatest Irma lines with the lamest Corny lines. You rock dude, keep this up.

Awesome twist on this chapter, nicely done old boy. This should spice things up. Kdh.

Oh dear! The Oracle is sure to know about what happened to those three, especially poor Ichi, and will tell the WITCH girls. I refuse to believe that the Shadow Guardians are evil! And I dunno what Heather's folks have done, but for sure I hope that they get beaten up! But wait, if we've got Shadow Quintessence, Shadow Fire, and Shadow Air, where's Shadow Water and Shadow Earth? And how come only Heather has a weapon? And I feel so BAD for POOR ICHI! T_T DEATH TO HER DAD! "sobs"

Sounds awesome, I love Ichi already; she's so cool ^_^ What'll happen next?

This is nice, nice and awesome! You keep it up!