Evilly good

War Rock/Omega-Xis does remind me of Deadpool. This chapter really brought back some memories for me.

This struck me as a filler. Still pretty good.

I said it once, and I'll say it again. I like how you keep her stubborn. It may sound strange, but I find it cute.

I like how accurately you've portrayed her personality. I probably spelt most of the word in the previous sentence incorrectly. Too early in the morning for this sh- crap. Note to self, watch swearing.

Changing her look, huh? An interesting approach, but in my experience, it never helps much. Still, a little change can be good. Wearing the same outfit for two or more years does not speak of a healthy mind. In the end, a good call I'd say. Did that make any sense?

Hm... Not bad.
There are bunch of grammatical mistakes within your story, but that can be easily looked over.

As for the layout of each of your chapters... It's OK, except for those super long paragraphs. It hurts my eyes. If you could break them into several paragraphs, that would be great.

Story wise, it's pretty good. It starts out unbiased, which is an excellent sign that you're going to introduce some character development. In addition, us readers get to read how the relationship builds. I hope.

It seems that you're going to stick with 3rd person omniscient (meaning you, the author, can choose to reveal the emotions of any character you choose) for the duration of the story. It might help if you switch to 3rd person limited (told from an outsider's POV, but only reveals the emotions of ONE character), but with POV switches (If you don't know what I'm talking about, check out my fic. But a fair warning: it contains a pairing that you may not like). I personally find this to be more beneficial for my writing, and it might help you out as well. If you decide to incorporate POV switches, be sure to include the POVs of the main characters (Subaru, Luna, and Misora).
My suggestion: Try it for a chapter, see if you like it or not. Then, ask your readers whether they prefer the new style or the previous one...

I hope this review was unbiased; I'm one of the other people who prefer the other pairing, so sorry if it seemed like I bashed your fic.

Hopefully, us writers with varying opinions can get along. By basing reviews on the plot and not the characters, this can be accomplished...

Overall, good story with an improving plot. Keep it up!

I only wish we'd have this type of character development in the anime and games.
As soon as I saw it was a SubaruxLuna fic, I knew it was you who wrote it. XD

The part when they are out in the hall is pretty funny. I can't believe that Ikuta-sensi would let them go out in the hall during class! Teachers at our school would rather shank you with their Geometry tools than do something of that caliber."Fine, fine. Why do you become class president anyway?
In this line, I should have been "did" instead of "do"."It's bboth/b your fault and if you keep shouting,
I think you had an HTML tag flip out. I know that pain. S"You don't seem to be a fan either, besides your initial dislike for eachother.
Each other is two words."...some dirty old many looked into her transer without permission.
I believe you mean "man."For the last time, just because I like Rockman-sama, doesnot mean I have any feelings for Hoshikawa-kun, War Rock!
Insert space between "does" and "not.
If those are the biggest mistakes, then that tells you something about the quality of your writing and that something is very good.

I really enjoy it and I hope that you continue writing it.-Added to the Shooting Star Rockman C2 Community-

You do a good job of tastefully building tension in this chapter. Remember not to get discouraged, keep at it! You've always got at least one review each chapter, from the great, mighty, benevolent, awsome, and oh so humble, Captain Deadpool! You should get more reviews once it gets a bit longer.

I love the strong emotion in this fic so far! This is some powerful stuff. There are one or two grammar mistakes, but I wouldn't worry about them, as they don't take away from the experience.