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Reviews For: The Dance

Kitsune Yarisha
2008-06-10
ch 1,
abuseWow, that was just amazing. I'm disappointed in myself for not seeing that Scott was dead earlier on but that might have killed it for me if I had picked it up, haha. And the whole time, I was wondering why the dialogue was weird-sounding to me but it clicked when Scott said his last bit. Hell, you made me jump up and scream, "Oh **, he's dead!?" Haha, which is awesome, if you couldn't tell. It was so worth it though. The entire effect is beautiful even it is OOC, heh.
Geek Squared 1307
2008-03-20
ch 1,
abuseSo sweet and sad.
G.S.1307
Cookie Gestapo
2008-03-06
ch 1,
abuseI could tell from the very beginning that Scott was dead.
You don't read as many fan fiction and stories like me and not be able to, after a certain point in time, pick up on those things.
Still, you had me blubbering like a baby though.
Poor, poor Logan.
Aloria-Catalonia
2008-02-05
ch 1,
abuseThat was just...Wow. I hadn't seen the ending coming at all! Very well written
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