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| Kitsune Yarisha 2008-06-10 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was just amazing. I'm disappointed in myself for not seeing that Scott was dead earlier on but that might have killed it for me if I had picked it up, haha. And the whole time, I was wondering why the dialogue was weird-sounding to me but it clicked when Scott said his last bit. Hell, you made me jump up and scream, "Oh **, he's dead!?" Haha, which is awesome, if you couldn't tell. It was so worth it though. The entire effect is beautiful even it is OOC, heh. |
| Geek Squared 1307 2008-03-20 ch 1, | abuseSo sweet and sad. G.S.1307 |
| Cookie Gestapo 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abuseI could tell from the very beginning that Scott was dead. You don't read as many fan fiction and stories like me and not be able to, after a certain point in time, pick up on those things. Still, you had me blubbering like a baby though. Poor, poor Logan. |
| Aloria-Catalonia 2008-02-05 ch 1, | abuseThat was just...Wow. I hadn't seen the ending coming at all! Very well written |