 Wrath21 2009-03-07 . chapter 1XD There you go...Bumblebee is evil! XDXD
You have to feel sorry for the Lambo Twins this time. XD |
 flamingmarsh 2008-06-25 . chapter 1I so love this story. I love it so much, i'm reading it again. i laugh like crazy!! |
 StarSwoop 2008-05-11 . chapter 6Very enjoyable! |
 theluckyshipper 2008-05-10 . chapter 6i feel sorry for 'lil bee...TT_TT
nice chappie...
please update soon!
thanks!! |
 Lady FoxFire 2008-05-10 . chapter 6Well it sounds like teh Twins and Bee are acting like brothes pranking each other but if you know anything about brothre only they can pick on someone so what if you introduce someone else who picks on Bee... so it's now the three of them against this newbie or Decepticon. |
 blood shifter 2008-05-10 . chapter 6sorry but i don't have any ideas for you right now. but that was really good. especially the part with sides hitting ratchet. didn't think he had the guts but i guess i was wrong. good job. |
 Cman710 2008-05-10 . chapter 6Great job if it's the end it was a good one. |
 GrimlockX4 2008-05-10 . chapter 6Great job on chapter 6 on how the twins got back at little Bumblebee.
I wish you the best of luck for ideas on continuing this story if you can. |
 flarey phoenix 2008-05-10 . chapter 6CONTINUE OR DIE! *evil laugh*
sorry... slightly hyper XD now...ehem, i have no idea on what you could put for more chapters...but...UPDATE! |
 flamingmarsh 2008-05-10 . chapter 6it was good =) but I do have an idea for ya. How about Bee glues the twins together ? thats all I can think of. |
 StarSwoop 2008-05-09 . chapter 5Ahh! I'm no good at long reviews! Would love an update soon though *offers ice cream* |
 flarey phoenix 2008-05-08 . chapter 5hm...AWESOME
lil Bee is like so cute and VERY devious XD
can't wait for your next update Twinette! :D |
 blood shifter 2008-05-08 . chapter 5knew he'd get caught sooner or later. awesome chapter. keep it up. |
 actionmoviefan1 2008-05-08 . chapter 5Wow, who would have thought that Bumblebee was such a sneaky little snot. Obviously he spends way too much time with the twins. Speaking of the twins I am very curious to know what they have in store for our little bee. I hope it is suitably devious and wicked enough to have me in stitches as I read. Bee will deserve his punishment after all he put the twins through but it will probably mean that they won't get the happy little surprise Prime and the others were talking about for their creation day.
Way to use a word I have never heard of. I would have used the word roster which is "a list of persons or groups, as of military personnel or units with their turns or periods of duty." This definition is straight from and makes sense when used in you sentence (for a while I thought it way a typo). But then I looked it up an lo and behold there it was in the dictionary. I guess you really do learn something new every day.
By the way I love your story. I have a great fondness for sparkling stories as it is and I can never find enough of them.
Keep up the good work
Was that long enough :)
P.S. I hope that sticking that definition in there wasn't considered cheating cause I really want you to update this week. |
 Cman710 2008-05-08 . chapter 5UH.. I don't think I canwrite one that long. Lol
Great chapter, can't wait for the next one!
(Check out my new fic when you get the chance, you may like it) |