This story was absolutely AMAZING!

I have read the whole thing occasionally over the past couple of weeks and it is brilliant. So well written, and not cheesy or anything. It was so good, i loved it. I hope to read a lot more of your stories, cos if they compare to this one, i bet they're great
Good job

I loved this story, I actually cried. I love Brooke and Peyton's friendship, you told it beautifully. And Lucas and Peyton... I'm a Leyton fan, this story was wonderful.

good story

OMGAH.
So I know it's been a few hot minutes since I've reviewed...cuz I havent read much of anything lately. But I happened upon your Unkindness of Ravens story (which I will be reading tomorrow EEKK) and I was like, "Hold the phone," and I realized I never finished this.
This was an amazing chapter dear. WOW. I loved the Brooke part...I might be slow or dont remember but how did she die? Or has it been said already? My friend accidently blurted it out and so now I know. Darn. But I was just wondering if I had already read it. Hahaa.

Well. I am going to read more tomorrow night, I gotta get to bed now, work in the morning.
Love al your stories. But you already know that. Haha. Great job!

That was freakin beautiful especially the end Im like crying right now! lol I loved it seriously you did an amazing job

Great story, I spend two days to finish it.

The story was solid and you was successful by putting important details.

I can see your story ready to be a great movie.

Keep writing you have bright future.
Good luck and keep writting

wow i literally have tears in my eyes. This story was so heartbreakingly amazing and realistic, I dont think I'll ever be able to dislike the lucas/peyton pairing, at least not how you write them. This was trully beautiul, a definite experience to read, and pleasure to my ears. I like your writing style alot, because it's not pretentious and still devotes alot of time to necessary detail. I like how you characterized lucas and peyton as both having deep ties to brooke, but more so to each other. often, when writing lucas with either girl, alot of writers pit them against one another, but we always have to remember that brooke and peyton were best friends first and that's something the show and your story have nailed down as well, i really respect your ability to make every character lovable, yet flawed. It's really hard to do, but you managed. I liked the ghost brooke angle, very cool and loved all the little details, like peyt proposing, her being an executive producer. OMG also allison is an amazing mix of her parentts, i think making a girl love basketball is unique and also very expected, it's as if the scott blood just keeps flowing through each generation. I liked the realistic friendship between peyton and haley, and i loved the nathan/peyton and lucas/nathan interaction. The Leyton intimate scenes were adorable and sweet and I just loved the story overall. You are a gifted writer, thanks for bringing characters like peyton and luke alive.
Yana

I love your writing I loved this story!

Just read this whole, start to finish...LOVED IT! Great job! Hope there's a sequel)

Best story I've ever read. Amazing job!

This was an awesome story to read. You have amazing talent.

awe i loved this chapter! great work!

Aw such a great ending!

I absolutely loved this story! So well-written, so moving. Once I discovered it, I stayed up all night to read it beginning to end. Definitely one of my favorite OTH stories. Can't wait to read more stories from you. Thanks for such a wonderful read.

Now, this, I have to tell you, was utterly fantastic. It's probably my favorite out of everything you've written (not that I didn't love your other works, this one just struck a cord in me). Phenomenal job.