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| Sky Falls 2008-03-06 ch 1,  | abuseI really enjoyed the conversation between Sasuke and Kabuto. The story was interesting throughout it as well. Great job, -Sky |
| storm-of-insanity 2008-02-23 ch 1, | abuseI love your description about Kabuto trying to calculate Sasuke's time to respond. |
| Maziana.M 2008-02-09 ch 1, | abuseGreat, I really like your details and descriptions of the weather, especially in the first paragraph. And Sasuke... Good story, different and interesting. |
| Kaira-chan15 2008-02-06 ch 1, | abuseLol I loved these lines: and gods forbid the Uchiha receive a compliment. Kabuto was certain that should that calamity occur, the prodigy’s ego would inflate past human proportions and cause the body to burst from internal pressure. “Oh? I was under the impression that that was one of your usual hobbies,” Wow, I don't think there's even a word to describe how wonderful your writing was. It was the most well written fanfiction I've ever read! wonderful job, and the storyline was good too! Lately, I've been obsessed with Kabuto and Sasuke stories. I really liked it, nice work! ^_^ |