This is an awesome- a great story so far, and extremely well-written Please, please update soon! :)

Ooh ooh ooh ooh ooh Michael AND Kolya. Sweet action! Yay, for a stupendous chapter and boo for it ending. Thus far, I have to say you have done an excellent job with the cliffies. Geeze, I am sitting on the edge of my seat AGAIN as I eagerly await more. Patience is a virtue right? Rigght being patient...so one of my strong suits.

Wel, keep up the good work,
Lemons

oh very interesting! i would love to see where this goes! great job so far:)

I thought as much. I can't wait to read what happens next!

ha sweet! Yay, best villian EVER makes another comeback. Oh how i love love love genii fics, especially ones with a certain deliciously evil commander. Woo hoo now i totally can't wait for the next part!

NICE WORK,

Lemons

Hm grey uniform and dark hair? Hopefully my fave villian EVER will make an appearance...I guess I will just have to wait and see. NIce fic so far, suspenseful and completely interesting! Keep up the good work,
Lemons

--OH i really hope that was Kolya, really really do!

After your wonderful romp through the 'Dragonriders of Pern' crossover, I was looking forward to your next fic attempt somewhat... impatiently, shall we say? And I must candidly admit I am not disappointed. The first two chapters have carefully set up the plot, your dialogue - as usual! - cleanly advances the story, and your characterizations are spot-on.

And I'm ridiculously pleased you've let Rodney get into trouble in such short order. Absolutely lovely!

Thank you!

Nice action and suspense there. Loved it. And the fact that they're sending out Dr. Keller seems to indicate a certain amount of whumpage ahead...? *crosses fingers* Can't wait for the next chapter!

This story is definitely bigger than the first chapter led it out to be and I am not disappointed as of course I did read the summary. If not for that, I might have been surprised. Good plot so far and I can't wait to see how they get out of this one. I do think I know who the people are aboard that ship; but I won't say and ruin it for others. Please update soon and thanks.

Hm. Interesting.

Good story; but I am wondering what is going to happen next as the person they were looking for was not there. Poor Teyla having to stay behind; but under the circumstances I am glad. Please update soon and thanks.

Great story, loved every bit of it. Wonderful descriptions of the environment and setting. And team Shep is dead on character. Can't wait to read more.

nice