Reviews for The goddess exchange program

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Zoro50 2008-06-10 ch 13,	abuseI liked this chapter a lot more, as I thought your non-manga chapters are much better than your manga ones. I like how you are portryaing Lind here, it is very belivable and IC with what you have layed out. I would have thought she would be more straight-forward, but i think your right in her keeping it hidden. Its also going to be interesting where Peorth takes Lind, since she basis her date spots on the manga she borrowed from Skuld. If you need a prereader/editor I volunteer for the job. I'm already editing for 2 other authors, so I have a pretty good handle on the process.
miss. nyx 2008-06-08 ch 13, anon.	abuseoh, i can't wait to find out if Peorth realises about Lind's ban. so sweet with the rings^_^. I've been waiting for this, just what i need before my piano exam. Thank you! looking forward to the next chapter. 3 more chapters of fluffy goodness between Lind and Peorth, i like the sound of that! Although we all know that with Keichi's luck there rarely is a quiet day:P keep up the good work
Zoro50 2008-06-05 ch 12,	abuseNice ending to this arc, and I have to say i am glad this is over too. YOur previous non-manga stories where much better than the manga based ones.
Zoro50 2008-06-02 ch 11,	abuseA nice fic so far, I think my only complaint is its shortness. A lind/Peorth pairing is nice, especially since there is no clear canon pairing for them.
Miss Nyx 2008-05-17 ch 12, anon.	abuseThank you so much for the update oh will Lind tell Peorth about her fight with Hild? looking forward to the next installment this chapter took an intersting variation on the manga (never thought what Urd and Peorth went through!) Lind + Peorth + Holiday (+ Norms and Keichii) =? (a romantic, fun disaster?) and of course Sklud has that damm kissometer! I await your next chapter and hope you also take time to enjoy what sunshine you may get! Miss Nyx
Gaian Knight 2008-05-11 ch 11,	abuseSorry for not responding like I have, SimCity 4 sucked up my time this time. =^^= Okay, first off, the usuals. Grammar and a bit of haste I still feel in the releases, still needs work some. I realize this isn't anymore professional than my own works, so I won't go down that route. Being an publishing author of any kind takes guts, more than too many well meaning critics that post, are themselves somewhat possibly unwilling to do. As such, the second off, it's fun to read through and see how the PxL relationship fits into the Eater arc. Not sure how much of the actual manga arc you read, but not reading it all by exact verbatim, (word for word,) makes it seems a bit 'different' than the usual. Some might not like it, I'm more open than that, so that's how I like it. Personally I prefer original stuff, but this 'is' fanfiction, so no one making a buck off all this, should conduct their own written fandom in the end, as long as it's done well enough. This one is, and moreso since it's being added to. And so I expect more, and see what more there is in store. Given this, I will keep watching for future chapters. =^^= Just make sure to try and improve the grammar and such. Even I need a Beta, so be sure to try and use one for clarity sakes. Good day and forth so. =^^=
Miss Nyx 2008-04-30 ch 11, anon.	abusethank you so much for the chapter! loving it ^_^! The fight begins and i'm seriously looking forward to it then Peorth and Lind can be back together again! keepup the great work!_
miss nyx 2008-04-19 ch 10, anon.	abuseloved the omake! and of course loved the chapter oh how will Lind react the Peorth's angel being pulled out! the tension grows! aw the hugging and kissing scenes! lol to Skuld's devise picking up their 'moment'. look forward to the next update ^_^!
miss nyx 2008-04-13 ch 9, anon.	abuseUpdated! tears of joy are streaming down my face! Please update again soon Angel Eater Arc here we come! oh can't wait Thanks for the update
Gaian Knight 2008-03-24 ch 8,	abuseCareful again about rushing these out, since there was a 'bit' of reading flow that was feeling 'bumpy' in places. At least that's how I seem to have noticed how one that 'reads' stuff, wants the story to come out as. But the instances of this were minor at best, the overall is as good as the last seven chapters have been. Nice to be named in another fiction too. Flattery will keep me reading this. =^^= I presume this isn't the last. And someone tell Hild to get rid of the LoT, the thing has no tactical sense. =--=
miss nyx 2008-03-23 ch 8, anon.	abuselove your story! Keep up the good work and really look forward to the next update!
Gaian Knight 2008-03-19 ch 7,	abuseA nice and nasty plot twist to another well done chapter. And yes the size is just right this time. Dramatic cut off is a nice touch too. Bated breath with the chapter, when such comes. =^^=
Dax 2008-03-12 ch 6, anon.	abuse:-).
Gaian Knight 2008-03-10 ch 6,	abuseAnother fun chapter, if still a tic short for my tastes. But heck with me there. The grammar still needs some tweak polishing, but i still look forward to review/read/gloss over the next chapter(s). Good to see this one still has life. (Unlike my story, though taking time away from writing will do that. Star Ocean 3 does it too. =^^= ) Keep it up.
Dax 2008-02-24 ch 5, anon.	abuse:-).

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