Reviews for The Resilience of a Shinigami Heart

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Spikesagitta 2008-08-10 ch 5,	abusethe kanji for hyakka would be..hundred flowers..a direct translation anyway..so Heavenly shield of hundred flowers or something like that... cool...very cool, too bad she doesnt have this power for real...
Spikesagitta 2008-08-10 ch 4,	abusenice^^ is all im saying :)
Spikesagitta 2008-08-10 ch 3,	abuseyou know..i think that the cats actually eat better than most humans...that's just so..weird if you think about it..and that was just a random comment...
Spikesagitta 2008-08-09 ch 2,	abusenice, kinda like the action scene^^ and..waiting to see that yuri spark
Spikesagitta 2008-08-08 ch 1,	abusei think you got Orihime down perfectly, with her funny yet weird inner monologue
kong is king. 2008-06-15 ch 1,	abuseI think Yoruichi liked being held by Orihime. This sounds like a really sexy pairing, but hey, I just like Yoruichi. KIRA IS JUSTICE! Kong is King
chapellefan 2008-06-11 ch 4,	abuseI really love the subtlety of the Soi Fon references. A girl utterly devoted to her, who worshiped the ground on her feet only to be caused pain and suffering really adds to her character. And the sex wasn't too bad either.
soultaker78 2008-05-13 ch 5,	abuseGreat story. You did a really great job of capturing Orihime's quirks, like her bizarre diet and random thoughts. You should definitely do a sequel, if only to see how the other characters will react to these events. For example, I don't think Uryu will be happy about Orihime becoming a shinigami. Also, she'll have to break it to Chizuru that while she's not straight anymore, she just doesn't like the bespectacled lesbian that way.
firelarc 2008-04-19 ch 5,	abuseloved the conspet of her having that praticular form of a zanpokto. actually it makes quite a bit of sense. nice going. nice story. cant wait to read more of your stories.
Chaos Nightbringer 2008-04-11 ch 5,	abusehuh. Orihime's Zanpakuto doesn't entirely fit, I think, but it's still very original. BUT with Orihime's zanpakuto, she'd still be inferior to Ichigo in the realm of pure strenght and pratical combat ability. But Orihime's is more Kido then Kenjutsu like Ichigo's is, so it's a difference in principles as well. Just don't ask me how it doesn't fit, because I don't know yet. Perhaps something a bit more flower oriented, since a zanpakuto's name generally reflects its abilities. (Though there are always exceptions.) In a battle of just swords, Zangetsu would cut Hyakka No Tenshun(name's great, too, BTW,) off fairly easily, for cutting a named zanpakuto in half. BUT I LOVE IT!
JP 2008-03-09 ch 5, anon.	abuseGood stuff cant wait to sea her fight Aizens lot
Kyouger 2008-03-07 ch 5,	abuseI applaud your yuri ski11z once again, CNP. The ending wasn't exciting (Except for the battle with the hollow) or dramatic, but it was certianally cute, and what I was expecting. Overall, I'd say that this is definitely one of your better fics. Yoruichi and Orihime are both good together, and I hope I'll be able to see them in the future. I can't seem to find anything majorly wrong with this fic (Except maybe for Orihime being able to defeat a Menos Grande after a week of being a shinigami) and for a few splling errors. Overall, I give this fic a 9/10, for cuteness, but no spectacularness. That sounds like something Orhimime would say.
C.A.M.E.O.1 and Only 2008-03-06 ch 5,	abuseWell, u did a good job on it, I'll tell u!
Rabukurafuto 2008-03-06 ch 5,	abuseFear not, CrazyNinjaPenguin; Hyakka no Tenshun is a perfectly legitimate and appropriate name for Orihime's zanpakuto, basicly meaning "heavenly shield of all flowers" like you hoped. The part about the name that's off is the の in 百花の天盾. While there are zanpakuto with no in the name the character の isn't actually present. For example, Rukia's Sode no Shirayuki is writen as 袖白雪 instead of 袖の白雪. It's a mostly archaic and confusing name thing, so don't feel bad about it. Anyway, I thought it was a wonderful end to a wonderful story. The story just begs for a sequel, the romantic adventures of Orihime and Yoruichi! Well, once again my choice for next pairing didn't win, but hey, another Rangiku story isn't bad at all, and a story set in Seireitei might give me the inspiration to finish more of my own Bleach story. You know, I really admire how dedicated you are to get at least one chapter a week out. Well, see you in Echoing of the Fragile Wind the next time you update.
Rabukurafuto 2008-02-28 ch 4,	abuseWow, that was moving, man. The chapter was just perfect in every way. Beautiful. It was really cute and creepy to have brain-dead fake versions of Ichigo, Tatsuki, and Yoruichi wandering around. It would be funny if Yoruichi were to program a copy of herself to pleasure Orihime. Then Orihime could get it on with two Yoruichi at once! In case you are wondering, I voted for Retsu Unohana/Isane Kotetsu. I'd like to see Retsu in one of your stories. She's so sweet.

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