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Mitts 2008-08-12 ch 37,	abuseSo, was Raoul the intended target of the assassins, or Doctor Hannoh? And, was it Hannoh that called out, 'Kellie'? Was this the assassin's name? Does this mean that Hannoh knew the killer, therefore meaning that he could possibly have been in on the murder attempt of Raoul? And the puzzling information that he and Raoul always arrived to work at the same time. Does that mean they always spent the night, or possibly the early mornings, together? You are the mistress of giving information that only leads to more questions in your chapters, lol. Ok, the things I spotted for you... I ran through the reception are(a) towards the elevators and fired a few times Raoul and Dr Hannoh turned just to be taken aback by the mongrel assassin who was sinking to he(his) knees with a stale facial expression The way be buried his face in (the) curve of my neck Cursing wont(won't) help. but once that is done, the rest is a(take away this 'a') child’s play. Fantastic. I can't wait to see what happens now, to find out who was behind the attack, and why. Its all building up nicely!
Mitts 2008-08-12 ch 36,	abuseRaoul's shady secret life is slowly starting to emerge, isn't it? Who would have thought the uptight, upright Blondie with so little regard towards those 'lower' than he, would allow himself to be filmed taking a Blondie **? And Katze certainly DOES pose a good question...Who IS this elusive Aethelric? And will we be reading more yummy goodness about him? Lol Here's a few things I spotted... I feel (I) have to save them all in order to have evidence presented to the court, when that happens. But he only had to hear you(r) name to accept the deal. He is young. I think no more then(than) twenty years old I am not so surprised he managed to catch Raoul’s attention form(from) the very beginning. Brilliant, brilliant...brilliant!
Avernion 2008-08-11 ch 35,	abuseHa ha ha. This Aethelric sure is cocky! Hm... I always get so jealous when Raoul flirts with someone other then Kat. They are flirting, right. At least Aethelric is. Ha ha. Jealous of a past cause there is this fiction guy in the present that desperatly need some loving. Why do I feel that when Kat don't? I am so seriously messed up.
iamsenile 2008-08-03 ch 15,	abusewell i like this story...liked the doctor joke think it was the other chapter xd well i c raoul is jeolous isn't that special xd shows he might be human in some form lol well i can't keep typing want read the next chapter ! sorry lol i'm kinda corney lol crazy sense of humor but i really am injoying this!
iamsenile 2008-07-29 ch 1,	abusei know nothing of these two lol so i want expect anything! i must say the first page as sucked me in! i love katze's rudness.I like the tone to this. and the emotion so far. raoul is very hm wat's that word not sneaky now. i like this though! and i forgot blondies are suppose to have no emotions. you see i never read the books only saw the ova's. i have two on this computer i should look at them lol ok well keep up the great work xd whew i'm z this took alot out of me >< typing this lol
Mitts 2008-07-15 ch 35,	abuseSo, who is, or was, this Aethelric person? Going by what I could gather from Raoul's emails, he was another Blondie, but one that took pity on Pets? And why did the emails stop? Did Raoul hold to his promise and have him destroyed or removed? And it was sort of, bitter sweet to read emails from Iason. It made him 'alive' for a short while. Okay, now to the things I spotted that you might want to take a look at... Did you (k)now that it was at first just a virus envelope (K)Now this; I don’t know where your interest lies If this boy wouldn’t have caught Raoul’s attention in some way, the Blondie would have blocked him form (from) his mail a long time ago There are (is) actually no more communication going on between Raoul and this guy. There are some online Skylink calls going back and forth between Iason and Raoul. I’ve tried to listen to them, but the files of (are) encrypted and all I hear is a buzz Brilliant chapter from you, as always. This is getting so intense and indepth now. So many plots and twists. I'm still hoping that Raoul is innocent though, lol.
Mitts 2008-07-07 ch 34,	abuseUt oh...now Raoul has gone and done it. But, you write such clever twists and plots into your story that I find myself asking, 'Ah, but did Raoul deliberately do that to Katze, to provoke him into an action that will set the whole ball rolling? Is Raoul more in charge of events than Katze would like to admit?' Here's an error for you to amend at your leisure... “Have you ever (rap)ed someone with fury, pussycat?” Its going to be interesting to see what Katze does now.
Mitts 2008-07-07 ch 33,	abuseCome on now Katze. You should know better than to think you can get away with juggling two lovers. You are going to have to make a decision soon. And hm, not sure I liked the way Tri handled their date...taping it and inviting a third person to join without first getting Katze's consent. To put so much trust in to what is virtually a stanger is very dangerous for Katze to do. For someone who is over zealous about computer security, he's not quite so hot on his own safety and security is he? I mean, who knows what damage that video will do in the wrong hands, and DID Tri peek a look at Katze's face when he was passed out? I'm still not one hundred per cent certain about that Tri's intentions, lol
Mitts 2008-07-07 ch 32,	abuse'Oh what a tangled web we weave, when first we practice to deceive'... Methinks something may go drastically wrong for Katze. How convienient for him that Raoul couldn't make time for him that night. Was that planned? Does he know about Katze's date with Tri? Or simply have suspicions? Spotted these for you... When (we?) stepped off the craft and... I got a message form (from) him yesterday. He will look me up
Mitts 2008-07-07 ch 31,	abuseOh...they had sex! Lol. I simply adore their 'love/hate' relationship. Something is sure to go wrong to put paid to Katze's happiness at the night he's just shared with Raoul. Spotted this tiny error for you... You now, (know) he has a habit of slightly chewing then flaring his nostrils Also, you might want to think about re-wording that sentence too, because it reads as if Raoul chews and flares his nostrils, lol.
Mitts 2008-07-07 ch 30,	abuseWas a little surprised at the slapping scene between Raoul and Katze. I mean, if Raoul is anywhere near as strong as Iason was, I'm not sure that Katze would have been able to hold Raoul's hand back like he did. Iason showed his strength in the anime, when he held up and lifted off the ground, one of Riki's attackers by the wrist, leaving his finger prints imbedded in the mans skin when he dropped him. Or maybe, Raoul didn't want to hurt Katze? Maybe the fact that the former furniture dared to try and stop him, swayed him? Hm, who ordered the execution I wonder? And what is going to happen to the captured mole? Read on...read on, lol
Mitts 2008-07-07 ch 29,	abuseOh...that bit about being in the lift, and finding it crowded with just the two of them in was excellent! Katze is definately going to have to watch his back now. I'm sure he's being watched from all sides. Talk about being caught between the devil and the deep blue sea...
Avernion 2008-07-07 ch 33,	abuseOh. What a roller coaster of emotions. Ha ha. Everyone loves our little Kitten. Understandable. And it is just too cute with the bunny >.< So nice to see Katze happy for a change. Lol. I do feel a bang of sadness for our beloved Tri. How can one stand up to Raoul? Poor guy. I really do hope it won’t all end in disaster and horror >.< Like. Blowing up the main characters because he gets dumped… Ha ha. The story is as breathtaking as always. =)
pikeebo 2008-06-15 ch 33,	abuseWow ... wwow! I started one chp and got hooked! couldnt' stop until chp 33. Sigh .. it's been a while since i read AKS .. and since i'm a riki x mink person, i have not thought of reading other pairing. BUT this fic got my interest ... i like the style and taste .. it's quite mature ... i like the storyline, it's full of "webs" ... hehehhe ... I quite appreciate katze and am glad he is the center of the fic for now. Do update soon!
Mitts 2008-05-15 ch 28,	abuseWhat the heck is TrxG, you ask. Well, I have my own theory. Trx stands for Trithorax. But I'm still not sure what the G stands for... And, if Raoul was so certain that Katze was the hacker, why did he not expose him? Here's a few little things I spotted... He continued, but then I couldn’t stop form (from) keeping the words inside. Everything that was in an electronic from (form) was far from safe from being corrupt. So I guess Katze WON'T be moving in with the Blondie, lol...

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