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| AJeff 2008-07-26 ch 1,  | abuseGood oneshot...great dialogue. Nathan and Peter will always need each other. |
| GreenLeoFiend 2008-07-26 ch 1, | abuseVery nice story you have written here. Love those brothers, always love those brothers. I think it was significant that when Nathan thought Peter was dead he was looking at all these pictures of Peter as a child. Peter will always be his baby brother. |
| bessie 2008-02-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseSpot On! Love the dialogue! |
| TaleWeaver 2008-02-06 ch 1, | abuseIs this isn't a flashback in the show, it should be. This is almost exactly what I imagine Peter and Nathan to be like during their adolescence/young adulthood; Nathan shows the support that is the reason why Peter idolises him, Peter feels different than anyone in his family (most teens feel this, but later evidence bears out that Peter really is different from the rest of his family), and Nathan doesn't really get that Peter has a valid point. |
| Polly 2008-02-05 ch 1, | abuseI loved this - just a shame there wasn't more of it as I could have read SO much more of this! But I feel badly for Peter - as though this is a kind of very ironic foreshadowing and the poor little guy needs his big brother! Very nice, moody teenage Peter, by the way - I liked the 'brooding not pouting' comment. |
| CountryPersonel 2008-02-05 ch 1, | abuseThis was great. I enjoyed it. Nicely done. |
| *nat* 2008-02-05 ch 1, anon. | abusesque! you seriously made my day...i love it |