Hi,
I really enjoyed your story. I appreciate the family dynamics intertwined between Lundy and LaFiamma. I look forward to more of your stories. There scenes has juciy drama layered at all the right spots. I like the way you create interesting backstories for your original characters. They meld into the cannon well. Even though injuried, I could visiualize Joey still fretting over Morgan and Levon over both. I especially enjoy the word plays between Levon and Joey. You have the two main characters nailed when it comes to their anticipated reactions to given circumstances. Bravo to the author.
Sincerely,
Mistx2