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| apocalyps24 2008-06-09 ch 33,  | abusewell apart from the spelling and grammar mistakes that i noticed throughout the story it was very entertaining although i would have liked a bit more detail in some spects all in all i look forward to reading more of your work apocalyps24 |
| smithcrafter 2008-03-13 ch 33, | abuseGood story. I know how hard it is to come up with something really original in a genre with so MANY entrees, but I think you accomplished it very well. |
| FORD B 2008-02-21 ch 33, | abuseA really great story from beginning to end! |
| trekaddict 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abuseI just started reading and I like it so far. |
| bristow1941 2008-02-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseReally liked it, but the end of the story feels rushed. The pacing after the birth sped up too much and you lost the detail that made the initial portion so intriguing. |
| Dreamer22 2008-02-07 ch 33, | abuseI love it very well done!! I lvoe the little slip that a woman, most likely Clinton, will be pres. Very well done I look forward to reading mroe of your work! |
| scottiedog 2008-02-07 ch 16, | abuseLooking forward to more! I think Daniel and Teal'c are in for a real shocker! Good Job! Keep up the good work! |
| Teri 2008-02-07 ch 16, anon. | abuse"Captain Adrienne Johnson," a Days of Our Lives Fan? Regardeless, what a mean place to stop, just as Jack's secret is about to come out. I am very much enjoying this story. Thank you for sharing it with us. |
| qqball 2008-02-07 ch 16, | abuseI really like this story. Keep it up. |
| lkhoward88 2008-02-07 ch 16, | abuseWhat a great cliff hanger! I can't wait to see Daniel bend over backwards apologizing after he finds out the truth! |
| datnetie 2008-02-07 ch 12, anon. | abuseHi! Great story so far! Really, love it! But I'm a bit confused - first off, chapter 11 and 12 are the same again. And then is there one chapter missing between 11/12 and 13? At the end of chapter 11 Jack is bringing Sam back home and chapter 13 starts with Sam and Jack being engaged?! Should we assume that Jack asked her at the picnic? Hope you can clear that up a bit :) Other than that I’m really looking forward reading more of this! |
| Dreamer22 2008-02-07 ch 12, | abuseanother repeat, 11 & 12, but I'm enjoying it!! |
| FORD B 2008-02-06 ch 11, | abuseGreat story going on here! Really looking forward to what else is to come. Chapter 11 however, is just a section from chapter ten if you didn't notice. |
| Dreamer22 2008-02-06 ch 11, | abuseI am greatly enjoying this story and look forward to more, but you may want to know that chapter 10 and 11 are currently identical |
| Zaxxon 2008-02-06 ch 11, | abuseAlways enjoy "Jack is Mac" stories... For the record, your Chapter 11 is exactly the same as Chapter 10. I've added your story to my list on FavoritesTracker [dot] org. Looking forward to more. |