Hi,

I like your story here. The first chapter sets up an interesting plot. I hope you continue. I loved watching the series and wished it had lasted much longer. I believe that there is going to be some great angst involving Joey. I would love that. I don't suspect that Joey would leave voluntarily even if the contract on his life was up, so I'm impling that Uncle Mikey would have to use deceit or forceful tactics to get Joey out of Houston and keep it quiet. See, now you need to add some more chapters to see if I'm anywhere near close. I look forward to your next posting. I loved the scene in chapter 2 where Zack was going to pound Joey for Morgan staying at his place. You truly had Levon pegged as the instagator in that little setup. It really came across as true to character. Well, I'll let you go. Please let me know if I'm close in my prediction of the next chapter or two.

Sincerely,

mistx2