...wow. That is powerful.

wow! i gotta tell u i hate poetry and i told myself i was just going to read it cuz it was a Toddett story but wow. thank you 4 putting a happy spin on the ending to the movie. that was amazing.

this is pretty good. write more

what a sad poem. it made me cry... ;o;

I really liked the second poem, they finally got their home by the sea. It made me tear up!
I thought the first one was well written, but I just liked the second one better.
Anyway, great job!