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Aosugiru Sora
2009-08-01 . chapter 1
Wonderful, but quite sad. I just really enjoyed it. :)
Trumpet-Geek
2009-04-10 . chapter 1
I've really been into angst lately, so this was a good read :) I love Gracia's selfishness. She's always portrayed as the perfect little housewife and I hate that. And Edward... I loved Ed in this fic. He and Gracia. Everyone else was fairly flat.
Lost In A Dark Wood
2008-09-20 . chapter 1
This is a very well-written piece with a great handle on angst.
Faramae Baggins
2008-08-28 . chapter 1
So depresing yet beautifully written. :)
IVIaedhros
2008-06-27 . chapter 1
I'm always happy when I stumble over these little gems featuring the minor characters. Well done, especially with the emphasis on the wedding decorations and how they related to Gracia's husband.
Polly-P
2008-06-24 . chapter 1
That was sad and lovely.
Once again, you did a perfect job :)
ljkaf27
2008-05-29 . chapter 1
I love the feel of this. So often stories focus on the ones for whom everything turned out all right, focus on the "happily ever after," as it were. This manages to get across that even when everything's perfect for someone else, there's always someone for whom nothing will ever be all right again. You've managed to convey that feeling exceptionally well with both your exquisite portrayal of Gracia (about as spot-on as you can get) and with Edward (who's written perfectly...quieter, more reserved, letting his bitterness seep through little by little). Great conveyance of melancholy without burying the story under soul-crushing (and, as is often the case, utterly uncharacteristic) levels of angst.
WhiteLadyoftheRing
2008-03-11 . chapter 1
This is absolutely lovely, well-crafted and complete and heartbreaking. Saying it's wonderful would be an understatement. Keep up the terrific work.
InuyashaLuver1224
2008-02-21 . chapter 1
This is a very sad tale. I loved all of it except the Al and Winry part...nasty...still! I digress (is tat how it's spelled?), this was very well written and very intelligent! Bravo!
Legendary Chimera
2008-02-09 . chapter 1
ZOMG! Awesome as always! I could hug you Armstrong style now for the Alphonse/Winry in the background! Elysia is adorable and your Gracia is amazing. She needs more love doesn't she?
Forget and Forgive
2008-02-07 . chapter 1
:O Oh my Al and Winry! *grins*
j-mercuryuk
2008-02-07 . chapter 1
W0onderful I love it. So much better so many other Royai wedding stories. Thew darker feel to the fic is wonderful and also seeing things from Gracia's point of view.
raceulfson@pacbell.net
2008-02-06 . chapter 1
Beautifully bittersweet. I almost wished Ed and Gracia got together, even if she was more of a mother figure. They both seemed so lost.

Great job on showcasing the characters and how they changed, and on not making Elysia too too cute.
Anti-Logic
2008-02-06 . chapter 1
Beautiful as usual. I haven't read any Gracia-centered fics before, but even if I had I'm sure this one would've taken the cake. I could envision the scene at the very end so perfectly - Roy's dashing smile as he extends his hand, and the utter contrast between the two as she takes it.
Michi P.
2008-02-06 . chapter 1
Oh WOW. That was amazing, awesome writing as usual! Great job on this, I kind of can't talk right now (the speechlessness is affecting my ability to review coherently...sorry)!! Thanks so much for an enjoyable read. Keep up the good work.

~Michi P.
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