I liked this a lot. I was really sorry that Wilhelmina was dropped out of the final BJ books. She's a great character that, as yours and other fanfic stories have shown, had the potential to grow in interesting ways as a result of the changes Witch brought to the Living Realms.

You sure do like to tease poor Wilhelmina! Your portrayal of Wilhelmina's thought process was beautiful... constantly questioning her actions, whether they would please others yet at the same time wanting to rebel against them. Best part? Lucivar stating, "I can see her in you. She touched you, too. And that means that you belong here.” Wonderful fic!

And it's so sad that he dies! Her friend!

Oh, this is lovely.

I am very impressed. You're writing style is very mature. Great Fics.

Aw, that was so perfectly Wilhelmina. Some people just don't know their inner strength, and she's DEFINITELY one of them. It's a sweet ficlet though. Cute. I can see this happening. XD

Yes! Another Min Daae fic. And I like it. Hope for more.

I enjoyed this one-shot! You captured the characters well. It's a good short story. (I bet you've read the trilogy as many times as I have, if not more, in order to portray the characters so well!)

Just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this. _ Wilhelmina is one of my favorite characters, and I was a bit sad that she faded out of the story a lot. But you've done a wonderful job portraying her, and I love the conversation between her and Lucivar, with Dejaal offering to jump on Lucivar for her. XD Great work!