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101spacemonkey 3/29/09 . chapter 4
is that it? is that the end? or is this like a what if scene? or a dream sequence?

please don't let him be dead...
101spacemonkey 3/29/09 . chapter 3
he'll be ok, wont he?
101spacemonkey 3/29/09 . chapter 2
hugs for everyone! this is heartbreaking
101spacemonkey 3/29/09 . chapter 1
no not my poor merton!
optimistic girl94 9/15/06 . chapter 3
No. Don't tell me you are going to kill Merton. You can't.
optimistic girl94 9/15/06 . chapter 2
Aww. This is so sad. I am going to cry. You are a good writer.
optimistic girl94 9/15/06 . chapter 1
What the heck? TNT sucks. How coudl they? To Merton.
eraty 5/9/06 . chapter 4
I'm quite late, I've just read this fantastic fic.
I liked the ending. No one found he had cancer because no one really cared about him?

I suck at reviews and I'm really too late to review this...
Sorry.
Lapinina 4/11/04 . chapter 4
Heartbreaking. Utterly and completely heart-breaking.
many things converge 3/20/04 . chapter 4
You suck. *cries*
This was awesomely good, and inspirational (in a sort of depressing, angsty way). I liked the shocker at the end. Didn't expect it.
Ophelia Flood 5/12/03 . chapter 4
You evil, evil person! I burst out crying at the end of this!
Luscious Kinney 10/29/02 . chapter 4
OMG! *sniff* I can't believe that. You, my friend have talent... but let's say that when it comes to Merton we use it for good? lol Great Job
Merton Lynn 9/22/02 . chapter 4
::sniffle this is one of the best BWOC stories i've ever read. keep up the good work
GSYH 4/7/02 . chapter 3
I have the incredible desire to rip those two morons into sheds and use them as bonemeal for me garden.
GSYH 4/7/02 . chapter 2
Oh, Merton
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