yet again another enjoyable read. not much action, but it flowed very nicely, can't wait to see what happens next!

I'm starting to get your pattern here having Jae's monologue that exist outside the main story. It is a nice way to convey the background of the main protagonist. Azula, lawlz. So I assume this takes place right before the beginning of book 3. Avatar: Gaiden. XD This chapter shows nice interaction between the two girls. ... Yuri, plox? :3 Anyway, nicely done and I can't wait to read what happens next.

Guess who, Desi! It's an exciting premise to something great, and cant wait to read what happen next to the Earth Bending hotti- warriors.-subscribes-

m... mayn, that was freakin' awesome! It had lots of detail, action, emotion, and it all fell together very nicely. Every scene came to life as I read this and it was a very enjoyable read. Very nice! I kinda teared at the end Dx...

This was really good! It was like I was watching an epic episode of Avatar in my head! There was so much detail I could picture everything clearly! A lot of action and emotions flying...As well as weapons and fists and fire and such haha. I really enjoyed it! 8-)