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Reviews for: An Unlikely Hero
ein dwang
2009-05-04 . chapter 1
I loved the concept. You did a great job expressing the Fourth's pain and regret. You wrote this fic a while ago so are you still planning to write a sequel?
Blitz-Sora
2009-03-06 . chapter 1
Oh...! Awesome idea, can't wait for the sequel! Will it be multi-chaptered?
anbumoo
2008-08-21 . chapter 1
...I think I love you! This idea is awesome! XD Great job! I look forward to the sequel!
Shawny Wong
2008-04-28 . chapter 1
Fascinating twist to the storyline. I found this through your line on naruto_contest on LJ. I hope you do continue this. :)
yotada
2008-04-05 . chapter 1
interesting twist ^ ^

hey, but does that mean that the villagers will hate Kashi now? No! poor Kashi! hm...I wonder how Naruto will turn out since his mother is alive and the village doesn't hate him.

update soon!
EwanLuvr4Ever
2008-02-10 . chapter 1
wow this is amazing!
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2008-02-07 . chapter 1
you are aware of the fact that in naruto a child is used because they have no chakra coils, if it was sealed into kakashi he would have been torn to shreds by the kyuubi's chakra and died violently.
ZOMG!
2008-02-06 . chapter 1
E! I always wonder what would have happend if Kakashi was the vessel inseted! PLEASE UPDATE!!1!
Ditzyninja2249
2008-02-06 . chapter 1
I love it. It's an interesting concept for the Yondaime to seal the Kyuubi in Kakashi and not Naruto. Can't wait to read the sequel. Good job!
ninbunny alchemist
2008-02-06 . chapter 1
wow that was great i wise u would continue it this would be a great story if u did! Well that what i think at least!
Novocain
2008-02-06 . chapter 1
Woot! And it is here. *mosies over to the little blue check boxes* Have a lovely day!
Prescripto13
2008-02-06 . chapter 1
Very, very cool.

I don't think they've ever shown (in the manga or anime) where Kakashi was that night, have they?

You captured the intensity of the event quite well. The moment when Yondaime decides to seal the fox into his student is striking. It's a one-shot that definitely merits a re-read; the sequel/companion piece should be interesting.
LiMiYa
2008-02-06 . chapter 1
intense and compelling, your descriptions were so vivid that they felt real.
a great one-shot!
(can't wait for the sequel!)
rook
2008-02-06 . chapter 1
You NEED to do a sequel to this. Add a few chapters or something. There is a lot of potential for this story.
Lupanari
2008-02-06 . chapter 1
This would make an *awesome* story if you continued it from here. Seriously, this plotline is too good to just leave off here. :D :D :D It's a very interesting idea, one I haven't seen before. Yeah, I've seen 'demon sealed in Kakashi' fics, but it's never been the Kyuubi before. :) Good job!
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