 ein dwang 2009-05-04 . chapter 1I loved the concept. You did a great job expressing the Fourth's pain and regret. You wrote this fic a while ago so are you still planning to write a sequel? |
 Blitz-Sora 2009-03-06 . chapter 1Oh...! Awesome idea, can't wait for the sequel! Will it be multi-chaptered? |
 anbumoo 2008-08-21 . chapter 1...I think I love you! This idea is awesome! XD Great job! I look forward to the sequel! |
 Shawny Wong 2008-04-28 . chapter 1Fascinating twist to the storyline. I found this through your line on naruto_contest on LJ. I hope you do continue this. :) |
 yotada 2008-04-05 . chapter 1interesting twist ^ ^
hey, but does that mean that the villagers will hate Kashi now? No! poor Kashi! hm...I wonder how Naruto will turn out since his mother is alive and the village doesn't hate him.
update soon! |
 EwanLuvr4Ever 2008-02-10 . chapter 1wow this is amazing! |
 ? 2008-02-07 . chapter 1 you are aware of the fact that in naruto a child is used because they have no chakra coils, if it was sealed into kakashi he would have been torn to shreds by the kyuubi's chakra and died violently. |
 ZOMG! 2008-02-06 . chapter 1 E! I always wonder what would have happend if Kakashi was the vessel inseted! PLEASE UPDATE!!1! |
 Ditzyninja2249 2008-02-06 . chapter 1I love it. It's an interesting concept for the Yondaime to seal the Kyuubi in Kakashi and not Naruto. Can't wait to read the sequel. Good job! |
 ninbunny alchemist 2008-02-06 . chapter 1wow that was great i wise u would continue it this would be a great story if u did! Well that what i think at least! |
 Novocain 2008-02-06 . chapter 1Woot! And it is here. *mosies over to the little blue check boxes* Have a lovely day! |
 Prescripto13 2008-02-06 . chapter 1Very, very cool.
I don't think they've ever shown (in the manga or anime) where Kakashi was that night, have they?
You captured the intensity of the event quite well. The moment when Yondaime decides to seal the fox into his student is striking. It's a one-shot that definitely merits a re-read; the sequel/companion piece should be interesting. |
 LiMiYa 2008-02-06 . chapter 1intense and compelling, your descriptions were so vivid that they felt real.
a great one-shot!
(can't wait for the sequel!) |
 rook 2008-02-06 . chapter 1 You NEED to do a sequel to this. Add a few chapters or something. There is a lot of potential for this story. |
 Lupanari 2008-02-06 . chapter 1This would make an *awesome* story if you continued it from here. Seriously, this plotline is too good to just leave off here. :D :D :D It's a very interesting idea, one I haven't seen before. Yeah, I've seen 'demon sealed in Kakashi' fics, but it's never been the Kyuubi before. :) Good job! |