This is brilliant and quite fascinating. Well done! ^^

Oh, WOW.
(Yeah, sorry, I'm rather speechless at the moment after having just read your fic.)

Perentie Fan has some points, but still, this was written pretty well :)

10. Despite his numerous liaisons with women over the years, he only had two children - ironically, both of them women. Yuuhi Kurenai didn't know who left her the priceless scrolls containing genjutsu that masters would kill for and Tenten didn't learn who paid for her weapons, or who left the Soshuryu scrolls on her pillow when she graduated the academy until Jiraya's will was found, months after his death.

This is an interesting thing to consider because both females don't seem to exactly know who their father is and both females are masters in 1 aspect of the shinobi arts they had to have got the drive from somewhere

Loved it! Very well written and insightful.

I love this story and would be perfect for the toad sage's charecter you should really write a story that has Jiraya with this sense even if he is not the main charecter well except that have his kid be a certin flash of yellow, with someone with excedingly large tatas would be great!

whoa, i got shivers.

i always loved 20 truths format

Man this was really good and I perfectly understand Jiraya stance on Sarutobi.

Beautiful.

a wonderful intake on jiraiya -i love the man to pieces-. thank you for writing this.

Just reading this short story has me on the brinks of tears. I really miss Jiraiya. He was honestly, one of the most loveable characters in the series. There is something I dislike in each of the characters in Naruto, but with Jiraiya. I just never found any fault with him. And truly his death was one of the most powerful piece Kishimoto had written. Anyway, thanks for the story - it reminded me of Jiraiya's greatness (SUPER PERVERT)

bloody brilliant, i don't like the whole tenten/kurenai thing you have going on but the rest are quite excellent.

After having lost sight of Jiraiya for a few months now, this sharply reminded me of why I love him so much. Thank you!

m, nice

wow. That was cool. Those little tidbits and pieces were great, particularly Tenten and Kurenai being Jiraiya's daughters.