 rimera 2009-01-02 . chapter 1Haha! It is certainly a rosy ending, is it not? Personally, I think Lacroix should have had Nick killed in a very public place, (though not permanently,) so he would have no choice but to leave behind the life which would end up killing both himself and Jeanette. But then... as Armand found out in Interview with a Vampire, tragedy lends a shadow of life to a vampire, but once one has overdosed on it...
The life ends. |
 Seriously Wrong 2008-07-08 . chapter 1Ahh yes, the rambling of a spoiled little child.;) Thanks so very much for the review Shinku. |
 Shinku-Lover 2008-07-08 . chapter 1Would you mind if I hurt you?
Understand that I need to
Wish that I had other choices
than to harm the one I love
What have you done now!
I know I'd better stop trying
You know that there's no denying
I won't show mercy on you now
I know, should stop believing
I know, there's no retrieving
It's over now, what have you done?
What have you done now!
I, I've been waiting for someone like you
But now you are slipping away... oh
Why, why does fate make us suffer?
There's a curse between us, between me and you
What have you done! What have you done!
What have you done! What have you done!
What have you done now!
What have you done! What have you done!
What have you done! What have you done!
Would you mind if I killed you?
Would you mind if I tried to?
Cause you have turned into my worst enemy
You carry hate that I don't feel
It's over now
What have you done?
What have you done now!
I, I've been waiting for someone like you
But now you are slipping away... oh
Why, why does fate make us suffer?
There's a curse between us, between me and you
What have you done! What have you done!
What have you done! What have you done!
What have you done now!
What have you done! What have you done!
What have you done! What have you done!
What have you done now, what have you done?...
I will not fall, won't let it go
We will be free when it ends
I, I've been waiting for someone like you
But now you are slipping away... oh
Why, why does fate make us suffer?
There's a curse between us, between me and you
I, I've been waiting for someone like you
But now you are slipping away... oh
Why, why does fate make us suffer?
There's a curse between us, between me and you
The Fireplace will fall!! |
 Battlesong 2008-07-06 . chapter 1Hi! I've just read this story and have to say: I love it very much. You get the characters of LaCroix and Nick perfectly, and I like the 'corrected' ending, too. The only part I did not like was that one:
'"LaCroix chuckled, “You whine too much Nicholas, you always have and it’s tiresome. Would you rather have killed her, have me drive a stake through your heart as the writers had planned? This way everyone wins, the fans have what they want, I have what I want and you certainly have what you’ve wanted, plus we got to fuck over the producers. What’s the down side?”'
Ah, you *had* to break the mood here and make a reference that it is just a fanfiction story? Up until that point, I was perfectly caught, and then that. I think the impact of the story would have been stronger if you had left out that ironical step out of the plane of the fictional universe to the plane of the show. I would have preferred it if you had kept the illusion.
But all in all, I think this end for the show works better than the canonical ending. Much better!
Thank you for writing and sharing! |
 MaryRose 2008-05-01 . chapter 1I liked this but I still hate LC. Let Nick go already you a.s.s.h.o.l.e! |
 fkforever 2008-02-06 . chapter 1 Great story. It sounds just like Nick and LC. |
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