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| Variable Star 2008-05-16 ch 16,  | abuseHm... That's much better. Now I get everything. At least, I think I do... |
| Variable Star 2008-05-16 ch 15, | abuseSo... River does have allies... but not very many. she needs to hury and wake up. |
| Variable Star 2008-05-16 ch 14, | abuseAnd Enter Vivian. Finally |
| Variable Star 2008-05-16 ch 13, | abuseI like this story. A lame thing to say, but I can think of nothing else. And I promised to say something. |
| Variable Star 2008-05-16 ch 12, | abuseThat cleared up a great many things for me, thank you. |
| Variable Star 2008-05-16 ch 10, | abuseso she didn't actually do it... hm |
| Variable Star 2008-05-16 ch 9, | abuseI love your style. |
| Variable Star 2008-05-12 ch 8, | abuseRafe is seeming kind of thick headed. The conclusion to draw with the information he has is that River did it. |
| Variable Star 2008-05-12 ch 7, | abuseSo does River know it was her or not? I /think/ she does, but I am not sure. |
| Variable Star 2008-05-12 ch 6, | abusehmm... Well that's messy. |
| Variable Star 2008-05-12 ch 5, | abuseYou haven't read the book have you? Rafe isn't that educated. He's really just a douce bag, but I guess you can take some artistic license. |
| Variable Star 2008-05-12 ch 4, | abuseHa! That makes me smile. |
| Variable Star 2008-05-12 ch 3, | abuseI pretty much think your writing style is amazing. |
| Variable Star 2008-05-12 ch 2, | abuseThis is really well written, but I am still confused. I feel like I'm missing out on part of the story. It's still really good though. |
| Variable Star 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abuseThis is one of the better Blood and Chocolate fics I've come across. But I haven't seen the other movie, apparently. So I'm a bit confused. |