Lol, their couches all match their clothes. Also, when you're describing Ellie, you put "violent" purple, instead of what I assume is supposed to be violet. Made me laugh lol.

Anyway, I'LL BETA FOR YOU!! YOU SHOULD'VE ASKED LOL. I'd love to, it'd be awesome. ^^ and then I get stuff before everyone else, mwahaha.

I loved the story, btw, very funny - and well written. It was nicely descriptive, and they were all in character. Good work ^^ We need to talk soon because we keep missing each other on msn lol. I'm not on as often tho, cuz school's back and I'm in my last year this year and with work my free time is limited but we totally need to catch up. ^^

heehee funny... and quite original i might add may i use it some time.. the idea i mean.. i could beta if you want.. although i have no FMA writing experience as i am relatively new on the FMA scene..hehe.
anyhoo nice...
~Lilly( ha! my name was used in there!)