Please finish both of them. Please, please, please.

tht was actually really good i absolutely loved it!

wow..now i know what a slight lemon is ok

omg i loved this it was so adorable!

i loved there little momments!

and there dance i love that song too!

im a big fan of Lonestar but im upset they broke up..:(

i meet them in nashville they are very nice!

but anyways on with the story thought iwould let you know what i tought of this chapter cause i loved it!

Toottles ASHLEY

Aw is all I can say.

I LOVED it. I never thought of Carlisle and Esme like that before. But,wow, that was really good in a sexy sort of way!

how sweet... im sorry i dont wanna read carlisle/esme tho ) old people! ew! )

NO UR WRONG!

THAT WAS AWSOME, MAYB IT WZ JST ME, I LUV TWILIGHT FLUFF, XACTLY WAT I NEEDED, KEEP WRITEN!

When will u write the next chapter?

I longing for it

I'd be happy to write them if you want me to.

I thought it was pretty good!

ahh, you won't make JasperxAlice lemony*pouts* you did fine on your POVs. i'm not one to judge anyway, when i did my different POVs i thought they sucked. good job and Peace out with love _ ,..,

Don't worry, i wouldn't know if you did or not either, i'm still a virgin too! which is ok, because i'm 14! I thought it was good, but what do I know? If you need any ideas for any of the couples i nammed in the last review i might be able to come up with some! If you decide to use them! I liked it! You should do there wedding scene just for the heck of it!

Amber

This was really good! I loved it i could totally imagine the whole thing! you should do one with Charlie and Renee before they broke up, Quil and Claire in the future, Tyler and Lauren now, Phil and Renee now, Eric and Angela, Jacob and Bella if she chose him instead of Edward, Mike and Jessica, now, Harry and sue, before he died, And last but not least Ben and Angela now! That would be a long story, wow! That's a long list! But it would be great!

Amber

hahah naw dont worry,

it was pretty good since u dont actually got experience

*neither do i so i cant really help*

but yea i kinda liked the 1rst ch. better of edward nd bella