Reviews for A wonderful present

Mayuzu 2008-03-20 ch 1,	abuseUmm, so Hiruma is actually an heir of the second in command? I think I prefer the human version of Hiruma XD It's sweet romance between HiruMamo though.
sexypancake 2008-03-03 ch 1,	abusehaha! that was nice. a little odd, actually making hiruma a satan-creature, but whatever works. i liked this fic, good joB!
sparkling-saphyre 2008-02-14 ch 1,	abusekawaai
devil cat07 2008-02-13 ch 1,	abuseYou have quite some grammatical errors here, which you should pay attention too. There are some people who lose interest when they see the author is not good in language. You also need a little help describing things (Eheh... so do I...). Sometimes things sound good the first time, but after rereading it, well, you get the point. I want to note too, that a flicker can't happen longer than a moment, so there's no point in mentioning it.
Bishieluver01 2008-02-10 ch 1,	abuseSweetness, really liked this one! A little confusing at the end; I couldn't really determine if the part about Hiruma being the devil's second in command actually fact or just a characterization about how he acts or how people portray him. But that's me; great job with everythign else! Nice characterization overall!