Pretty much amazing. I love the last few sentences.

Very well written. You had both of the characters voices down pat, and neither acted in a wildly uncharacteristic way. Keep up the good work.

Oh, wow.
I absolutely, absolutely LOVE this.
I wish I had something more constructive to say, besides how much I love it. I love the part about Snake losing his hair, about Darcy saying 'dammnit', about making mistakes. Wonderful.

THAT WAS SO AMAZINGLY WONDERFULLY FREAKING GOOD!

Seriously, this was amazing, totally original, I loved it.

Keep up the amazing writing!

-Maeve

You already know this, but I had to let everyone else know that I absolutely love this story! It's so realistic to Darcy and Snake's characters and to where they end up and where they were. :)