This was GREAT...
Loved it...

JENNIFER

aw!

aw i love it

that was sweet

E! KAWAII!!
So cute! ^_^

Aha, I feel that it should be PG13. =D
That was a bit "hot". Hee hee. I must take a break from R&R, it's 3 a.m. See you tomarrow night. 8-)

How very wonderful.

I like seeing Bella stopping Edward, it shows a lot and it is quite different.

I think you did a beautiful job of going through all that she had to be feeling and then seeing Edward through her eyes was amazing as always.

I love how it ended with them in an embrace and then his comment, very sweet.

You know this really is a unique story - in every single story I've read of Twilight so far (and there have been a few) I've never once see Bella to be the one who stopped them from going further - it was always Edward and his boundaries!
A unique idea and well written

XNicolex

That was well done. I saw the whole thing play out in my head...like a movie. You are very good love! I have never wanted two people to have sex more than these two but respect the fact they are waiting. I find I am just as frustrated with the wait as they seem to be. How weird is that? Your too good at what you do...your writing this out like you do seems so real. Quite a gift you have, one I am most thankful you share with this hopelessly addicted twilight/fanfic of twilight fan.

Thank you and please, keep it coming love!
DV

Very nice! You really stayed in character with B&E. This was fun to read. Hopefully we'll get something like this in BD!

i loved it.
so sweet, i lo edward wanting her so much,
its so nice, turning the tables around.

i loved this. It was really good. :D

Wow, that´s so sweet. *sigh*
I actually started breathing faster. :D
And Edward.. I mean.. god. But, yeah, very very cute, it almost hurt.
Regards.

Gods, you can just feel the sexual tension radiating off this story. I thrive on that (I do it all the time in my non-fanfic stories =P). Anyways, amazingly written. It makes me wish there was a little more to read. Keep up the good work!