Another really sweet story! Poor Lily...

Ohh my, this was sensational! I loved it! Great, super job! This was in all great! Oh I would love for you to write more on this. The ending left me begging for more!

This was beautifully written. Amazing job! I think that you really conveyed Lily's pain and confusion really well.

Great piece. I like the feeling you put into it, as well as the subtlety surrounding James and Lily's relationship.. ;) Sad yet sweet

Rhea

It was very nice and short! I like it! Short and sweet!

I loved it! Sad..but good!

wow...that was just so awesome...i love it, the descriptions were brilliant and the message was simple yet it was moving...really love it

Ah so sad

(in a good way trust me :] )

Really good writing

nice...

I loved it.

I really did.

i loved that... very saad, but yet sweet.

Very well written! I really liked this one, it captured every feeling of losing a loved one. Thanks!

i loved it and i feel like crying right now, i liked how you actually portrayed her emotions, ive read others where they kill off her parents and the next second shes snogging james and seems fine, i actually felt like she had just lost her parents, a feeling that is hard to portray, it was well written and basically amazing and you could tell while she noticed james, she was still in the middle of losing two of the most essential people in her life.