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xSapphirexRosesxFanx
2009-11-05 . chapter 1
hi! interesting story. u said it's going to havee Contestshipping in it? if yes i am sure i'll continue and i hope in the future May & Dawn would b great friends. if Dawn is falling for Paul were Drew will go? he'll love our kawaii May and Dawn could help her.
in other words however, i like it and i want to read the rest of it.
please UPDATE really soon!
c ya!
;-)
Apple Juice and Candy Floss
2009-08-15 . chapter 1
I like it!
Please continue :)
luna
2009-02-13 . chapter 1
I guess if paul is going to give dawn a prant battle she is going to give him a war!

by the way when is the next chapter comming out?
luna
2009-02-09 . chapter 1
wow good starting it makes me wonder if paul is acctualy rich. if he is then that explains why he is so mean all the time. but anywho please make another chapter I want to know what happens next:D
Tainted-Blossom
2008-10-09 . chapter 1
I like your story! Please update soon!
DrewxMay PaulxDawn AshxMisty
2008-09-20 . chapter 1
um, less swearing plz but its kinda good
Silver Horror
2008-07-16 . chapter 1
Poor Dawn, I hope she makes it, because I think Paul is a cruel trainer...
Midnight Summer
2008-04-30 . chapter 1
Wow..I thought you would make Drew worse than paul. But Drew's actually nicer! O.O Brava! You did the unexpected. ^^

~Midnight~
Babii-Softie
2008-04-27 . chapter 1
please please please update soon!
Yurippe
2008-03-13 . chapter 1
Wah, I LOVE Hanadan! Have you seen the Dorama? Jun Matsumoto who plays Doumyouji is so damn hot! And Shun Oguri as Hanazawa Rui... *drools*
Hehe, sorry, got carried away a bit...
I should have had an idea like that... ;_;
Please update soon, okay? ^^
Kimbley A-Splode
2008-02-24 . chapter 1
Love it:)
kadoo96
2008-02-22 . chapter 1
Prune ass? That is one thing I don't want to think about on Paul -shivers- I can NOT wait for this fic to get rolling. I has a good starting foundation to it plus...IT'S JUST PLAIN SWEET! :D
ikarishipping
2008-02-20 . chapter 1
This is getting really good!

Please continue soon!

Prune head. lol
Aeneid
2008-02-19 . chapter 1
Oh, nice. Based on Hana Yori Dango. ^^

First chapter was nicely written, and I love it. Hope you'll deviate a bit from the series and will surprise us with the twists and turns. ^^

Update soon!
wrath222
2008-02-09 . chapter 1
OMG this fic is awesome and you must update soon, please, please, please -holds up cookie- you'll get a cookie
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