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| ZeroKnoble 2008-03-10 ch 4,  | abuseI'm really enjoying this so far, keep poppin out chapters, unless you're finished, of course... |
| Pasta Masta 2008-02-09 ch 4, anon. | abuseIn my opinion, Kazooie is the best female nintendo character; she's got an attitude, even though she's just a little bird, that kind of irony always gives me a good chuckle, you know what I'm sayin'? Anyhow, it's coming together well, I shall keep an un-hairy eye on this fic, indeed! The average viewer would probably gripe about the chapter lengths, but creative juices making a good read is of equal importance, right? |
| Anniebunny 2008-02-07 ch 2, | abuseAnother thing I like about chapter one is the way Banjo sees Kazooie as a person right away, while the twins see her as a potential pet. This one has flow to it, good flow. I am already eager to read more of the story. |
| Anniebunny 2008-02-07 ch 1, | abuseI really like this one. You can see basic character traits that make the characters likable later (Banjo's patience, willingness to help)and I love the contrast between his cousins. And I already know I like Teddy. |
| Pasta Masta 2008-02-07 ch 3, anon. | abuseWell, I should have known this fic would be good, considering who wrote it. Probably the most detailed "how they met" story I've read about Banjo and Kazooie. Very well written, and kudos for continuing to develop your obvious skills in writing. Good-bye to you! Heh heh, I'm such a little weirdo. |