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| futures past115 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseThat was not good, it was excellent. First off, you didn't seem to have any grammar or spelling errors, something quite rarely found on this site. For that I thank you profusely. second, the emotion was absolutely beautiful. I could almost feel what the characters were feeling, and I could sure as hell visualize it. I don't mean to kiss your ass so much, but I sincerely hope that you continue, I definitely want to see another chapter of this in the future. My highest compliments, friend. Favorite listed and alert listed. regards, -FP115 |
| Snake of the Rose 2008-02-07 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was great! I wouldn't expect less from Panther, that devil. lol. Nothin' to criticize here. Great story. -SOTR |
| FeisarSYS 2008-02-07 ch 1, | abuseGood Story but Panthers last name is spelled Caroso. Command Misspelled his name. |
| Stinger - VXR42 2008-02-07 ch 1, | abuseI thought this was a particularly nice story - it was very well written and short - but not so short you're left dissapointed. Many people it's likely wouldn't find much in this, but I've alwasy loved it when an author has the intuition to go out and try something with developing a character, even if it was short. I checked your profile - though you seem to be more into the Pokemon fandom than this, I look forward hopefully to more works here from you. -Stinger |