WOW! omg. this is so interesting and amazing. the plot is great. i feel so much for demyx. i really want to find out what happens, and i hope you update soon! there's a lot of things i wanted to comment on but i can't seem to remember them right now ^^;; i can't believe i haven't found this sooner!

eagerly awaiting the next chapter~~

This has got to be one of the best semi-AU stories that I have read in my LIFE. And I'm not exaggerating that, I truly mean it. It's absolutely fantastic. The back story is presented so painfully in Demyx's speech, in his flashbacks, in the way he talks to people and how he acts around them. Every single chapter I'm just waiting for him to realise that there are good people around him and that people aren't going to stab him in the back at every turn. And you've portrayed him just so BEAUTIFULLY. His emotion is heartbreaking and the prejudices of other people just make me feel so bad for him and yet I can understand why they may think what they do of his kind.

It's sad but realistic and your writing is perfectly detailed, not missing a beat and I've learnt more about his past as I've read along. I really love the way you write this and I hope you do continue it eventually. I know your profile said it was on hiatus but even so, up until now, everything has just left me in suspense at the edge of my seat, waiting for the next chapter and turning the next page.

It's clever and pronounced; a fascinating exploration into the human psyche and the mind of someone who has been through so much in his lifetime and seen so many horrifying things. I love the mildly parental take on of Auron, the acceptance of Sora and Riku, the slightly harsh but understanding nature of Roxas and I adore your Axel and how he's gruff yet caring. The Final Fantasy inserts made me smile happily and even though he's a minor character - I think? - I loved Vincent. He's always been one of my favourite characters.

And Zexion is so enigmatic and he doesn't miss anything that goes on. I'm delighted by the depth of this story and the development of all the characters, even ones like Saix and the mentions of Hojo that make me dislike him and what he's done to Dem.

I suppose I should stop raving now and leave you in peace, without some crazy fangirl fawning over your story. But really, it's excellent and I do hope you'll continue this eventually.

Happy writing!

Rex

Reading your stories never ceases to inspire me! Which is particularly good this time around since I have a bunch of essays to write XP Maybe once I'm finished I can catch up on your other works. Here's hoping

Keep up the good work!
Love, Rox

AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING!! I hope to hell you continue! I am freaking exited about whats gonna happen next!

More please?!?!

Please, please, please write more on Marked And Haunted i really love it and want to know what happans!

I've watched you as an author for a while now (I forget which story initially got me hooked), and wandered by after you updated "Sink It In" recently. I hadn't read this story yet, so after reading through the new chapter if S.I.I., I hopped on over here, and found myself pleasantly surprised.

Now, this isn't to say that I'm not looking forward to the next update if S.I.I. (I am, because I want to know wha happens next and I hope that we eventually find out more about Axel's past), but I think Marked and Hunted is my favorite of yours by far, and I was disappointed when I reached the most recent chapter. I'm not normally a huge fan of Zemyx stories (hey, I'm a sucker for redheads, what can I say? :p), but I think this might be the most original plot I've come across on FFNet, and I'm absolutely in love with Dem's character here (in a totally good, clean way :p). You mentioned early on that this isn't a plot-driven story, but that you love writing Dem, and although the not-plot-driven thing isn't really that obvious (because I love the plot :p), it IS obvious that you enjoy writing the character.

I don't usually admit to this sort of thing, but I actually cried when I was reading some parts of this. And that's a good thing too :p

Anyway, although it will probably upset me when the story is finished, because that will mean that, well, it's over, I really look forward to reading more of it. There're so many other things I could say, but the review is getting lengthy anyway, so I'll cease and desist for now, and just say that I love this, and hope there's an update in the (near-ish?) future.

So long... I been deprived of this fiction for far too long.

It all came flooding back to me with this chapter, and I apologise for my EXTREMELY late review, but it has to be written. Such an insightful chapter. I'm so happy that Zexion and him have gotten just that tiny inch closer. And I love that whole little reference back to KH with Demyx's boderlining bi-polar attitude. He is just a big walking bag of emotions and I love him! I felt so sorry for him when he was in the teachers' lounge and still in his flashbacky state. It was like, come on Dem, Sexy Zex is here for you XD

Zexion is just perfect, absolutely how I would envision him to be in the game(if he wasn't a nobody). Like, he's just so sweet and simple but in a complicated way if that makes any sense. Like he knows what to do in situations as long as he can find some sort of analysis so that he can fix it, but he'll never think that there's something more to it. Well thats what I mean, and if it makes no sense to you then that's normal because I'm just very weird XD.

What I find interesting about this fiction, which I only just picked up on whilst reading this chapter, is that unlike TU, Water and even HTPD, like you're going to have to write *how* the charachters fall in love and like, I know that it will be amazing and yeah! I really can not wait. I just can not wait for the next chapter, and as always, no rush! XD

Guess I missed the initial wave for this story but whatever, i'm only on chapter one and I know that this is going to be awesome. the zombie part; brilliant. love it. Reminds me a bit of the movie DOOMSDAY, where the survivors of a epidemic turned into cannibals to survive. Your zombies are supposed to be heartless right? love your take on them, so original. Gonna go read the rest now.

HIATUS?!



Well, there's quite a few typos. D: But like, nothing too intense. Just saying. 8D

Other than that, and the slow plot development of this story which makes a hiatus SO MUCH MORE MISERABLE, I really like it!

I hope, you can continue it soon enough~

Aw poor Demyx!! I hope Saix eventually realizes what a good person Demyx is.
Thanks for writing this!
Tam

love it!
zemyx is a perfect pair. and you never fail to keep your stories realistic. of course, there can be perfectly happy endings, but it's not always that perfect. you keep real life in your stories though they may have roots of fantasy. i can't wait for more of this story :]

Poor Dem Dx
I definitely look forward to a next update!
This shall definitely be going on my alert list for whenever you decide to do so x3!
Great job writing!

Okay, If you care, I caught 699 reveiws in a screen shot for this chapter, and am totally willing to email you the picture.
Again, if you care.

ANyways~, This is a seriously amazing story, and I beg (Quote, Beg) You to continue it if it's not finished.
(I wouldn't know, I've not finished the already uploaded chapters~)

Love it! :] You definitly need to write more!