Wow, I loved the ending! It was a huge twist! But I don't get why they didn't hold council against Ares after Treska was born? Then she could've been with Apollo, but instead you turned Ares into a "good husband" adn Apollo into a carriage-robbing man-**?

but... that can't be the end... God, that's depressing.

That was great! to bad it's over... but danm you apollo, i used to think that you were cool, now, well now it think that ur, umm i can't say this online can i? okay. well great story, i loved it.
~meiscool2

I skipped to this part. Your writing is good. I can't say it's perfect, but it's good. The plot seems fairly better than most when the authors add in their own characters though I can't say much for originality in that it seems like I've heard this story before, just not in the context of Greek gods as marriage and alliances did not hold the same level of importance. I'm interested in this character you've dreamed up as Hades and Persephone have no children though there is some icky rape by Zeus. Yes, I used the word icky. It seemed appropriate. Your characterization of the gods involved in the love triangle are rather good even if the men are more than a little creepy occasionally. Also, perhaps it's due to not having read the earlier chapters, but even so, they seem rather amorous and overdone. She couldn't very well have forged strong relationships with both of them already.

Much love, Cat

(I'm sorry if you thought I was a little harsh. I do hope to get around to reading the rest of this and maybe I'll love it.)

This is getting interesting... I still think Antalent should have Apollo!

I love it, please update soon this is so wonderful.

Wow, so much has happened. I'm glad to have read this.

Bravo!
that was an amazing chapter!
i loved it!
deffinatly worth the wait!
but did you say that it would be the last?
well if that is true then now i'm sad :-(
-meiscool2

Ah, I love this story!
It's so god!
This is story is so well written.. I wonder who Antalent is gonna choose.. such a cliffhanger...

I love this story!

Please upadte soon!

I love it, please update soon.

This is a wonderful story so far, and I've only just finished chapter 2! But just so you know: Gods do not bleed. At least, they do not bleed blood. Ichor runs through gods veins in the place of blood, though I can not remember what color it is. But great story, please go on!

OMGOMGOGMOGMGOGMGOGMOGMOGOMGOMGMGOGMOmg GO GREASER!! LUVED IT U MUST WRITE MORE

Unbelieveable fantastic! more I beg you!

OMG shes gonna have a baby if you make it agirl name it Saela(Pronounced SAY-LUH) If you make it a boy name it EMILIOUS

I loved this chapter. mabey not as good as the rest but still really good.
meiscool2