I hate crying and this story had me bawling like a baby! Even though it made me cry, this was an amazing fanfic. I think that you did an amazing job keeping everyone in character through a very difficult situation!

That was a great story- you wrote the turmoil of Edward very well.

OMEC!

I LOVE ALL YOUR STORIES!

really i do love them !

i cried with this one. You are an awesome author!

Thanks for writing this.

Almendra.

SO cool!

Aw...you made me cry!

Aw, this one shot made my cry.. Amazingly written!

HarryPotter4Evah

You write really well, and Bella IS a danger magnet- the rock is plausible.

That's sad... but still a satisfying enough ending. It would be kind of interesting to see what happens next with alternating PoVs... Alice's mainly, every now and then Bella's. Charlie's for a small chapter. Hmm, may I have permission to do a continuation of this one-shot?

Beautifully written, your dialogue is exquisite! Very moving.

An amazing "what if" story. Excellent job. Your characters are always so believable. Thank you for writing.

cool alternate ending, but i dont think there would have been such a long conversation if a rock had fallen on her...internal crush injuries would have knocked her unconscious if nothing else, and i doubt Edward would have stayed away from her, i can only assume it was Emmett holding him back?

This was beautiful. Jake had to learn to let go. So did Sam and Bella.

I liked this one too, although i kind of hate bella in this. i could never do what she did, letting go of jacob like that. and it was a bit strange how she was discussing her and jacob's future with everyone-all the cullens-hanging around. i was like, god, poor edward.

Breath-taking, haunting, and beautiful...I'm very impressed by your story. All the characters were perfectly portrayed. I especially liked little moments like Carlisle brushing his hand on Bella's cheek and Edward's "Don't you want me to be the one?" Thanks so much for sharing it with us! You have a new fan!

That was better than the real eclipse ending! ! ! LE GASP! ! !