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| Reviews for Fantasy & Responsibility |
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   PokeChaser 4/30/12 . chapter 1Very well written! |
| twitchyfingers 10/12/08 . chapter 5 This is fairly interesting so far, and I like where you're starting to go but it's disappointing that you haven't actually gotten anywhere yet. I hope you eventually continue writing this. |
| Orioncat 3/17/08 . chapter 5 The story looks good...Is this a story of romance between Tom and his fiance or between him and Jane? Just curious. I like the outline so far of emotions, although any reader would love longer chapters. I look forward to your update. Thanks for submitting! |
| Swingflip 3/15/08 . chapter 5 Really good! I'm excited for more! |
| Sarahbarr17 3/7/08 . chapter 5 It's good to see Mary Paul's point of view. A little bit of a cliffhanger at the end! Sarah x |
| MariahDezie 3/6/08 . chapter 5 Keep going, I cant wait to find out what happens next! |
| jakeline 3/6/08 . chapter 5 Another great chapter. I look forward to get to know Mary! :) / jakeline |
| MariahDezie 3/5/08 . chapter 4 Please keep going this is really good. |
| Lady Highschoolnerd 3/5/08 . chapter 4 So will Lefroy meet Jane? Please update soon. Longer chapters would be nice. |
| jakeline 3/4/08 . chapter 4 Another great chapter, but oh so short! Keeps me want to read though! hurry up and write the next one! I'm waiting! ;) / jakeline |
| Swingflip 2/26/08 . chapter 3 i love it! please keep going :D |
| jakeline 2/22/08 . chapter 3 aww it ended too soon! I can't wait to read more! |
| jakeline 2/14/08 . chapter 2 another great chapter! I want more! Update soon! / Jakeline |
| Sarahbarr17 2/14/08 . chapter 2 Your writing is very good... Sarah x |
| Lady-of-Imagination 2/14/08 . chapter 1 I've been looking for a fiction about becoming jane, this one looks like it will be very good. write more! |
