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hellokittie 2008-06-24 ch 1,	abuseI joined just to say how much I loved your story. I hope you continue writing these! best femshep x garrus and best Joker I've seen by far!
Arysani 2008-06-20 ch 1,	abuseHahahaha. Joker's reaction is the BEST. And I'm glad you didn't get weird with trying to analyze Turian anatomy. That just always...gets weird O_o And: aww! Garrus gets to be a Spectre! glee Good stuff, thanks for writing :)
brokenpassions 2008-04-07 ch 1,	abuseLoved the last line, and the touchy feely part was very nice. The kiss the plam thing was orignal. Instant fave!
KSCrusaders 2008-03-02 ch 1,	abuseWow. I'll be honest; I didn't read the whole thing since I haven't finished the game. (I still managed to spoil bits for myself since I can't resist a Garrus/Shepard fic, but that's my fault and not yours). But what I did read was really, really good!
Spinderfly 2008-02-27 ch 1,	abuseLOL. You're great at writing for Joker, and Garrbear too.
Blackheart Syaoran 2008-02-19 ch 1,	abuseVery good. Kudos.
Lahara 2008-02-13 ch 1,	abuseGreat great great story. I think you got Garrus down nicely. Well, Garrus closer to the end of the game. I really enjoyed this, and found myself laughing uncontrolably at Joker, and the fact that Garrus lied about Joker. I'm a little scared to post something intimate that I've written, but I like how yours was done with hinting at it. I'm always scared of going over the "tasteful" line for intimacy in my stories... hence why I haven't gotten to write anything... er... oh god I'm just gonna shut up now. Shepard was well portrayed to me as well for a female marine. I mean she varies from writer to writer, but all writers have to remember that she's a MARINE. You made her seem a bit like Starbuck in Battlestar Galactica (in my opnion anyway) which was awesome. Keep up the good work and awesomeness. GO GARRUS!
xboxgeek 2008-02-09 ch 1,	abuseThat was wonderful! GarxShep all the way. It was really deep and thoughtful!
AzureAquarius 2008-02-09 ch 1,	abuseI "awwed" many times during your one shot. It was really sweet and romantic, but not disgustingly sappy like other stories I've read. It has a good quality that I've been yearning for. This is great, and the biggest AWW! was at the end. That is so cute that Joker told Garrus where to find her! I love how smart assed Shepard and Garrus are, and you seem to make the romance more realistic because they aren't always focused on one another's emotions all the time (I am so very glad that Garrus isn't trying to baby her in here but still holds a type of respectful restraint...you did a rather good job at keeping him In Character :D ). I'm so happy Garrus is a Spectre! Thats hott! I'd really like to see more about that from you (maybe like in another fic...I can only wish). Heh, and I also liked how casual Shepard was about nakedness. That adds much coolness points to your nonchalant Shepard Character. The only thing I felt was lacking was a more in-depth clarification to why Kaiden and Shepard split up. He doesn't seem like one to place too much blame on others (maybe just my perspective?) and seems that he might eventually be one to cling rather than leave. I just wanted a little more of an explanation. Anyways, I must say something that is complimentary to you, but mean to some of the other writers of GarrusXShepard. I'm a little bummed that a lot of the GarrusXShepard fics seem so Mary-Sue (I know this term should be applied to a single character, but some of the stories are Mary-Sue, heh heh) and clichéd, which really takes away from the awesomeness this pairing actually could amount to. I'm just very glad that this story has some really great quality, and give I Kudos to your skill. I see some talent that should be nurtured here! XD anyways, KOTOR? Me gusta KOTOR! I shall rush off to go read it right now! Thanks for sharing your story and (hopefully) putting up with my rambling! XD FAVED
VoiDreamer 2008-02-08 ch 1,	abuseLovely fic! OMG, haha...the ending was perfect - a nice mix of wittiness and seriousness. Thanks so much for sharing - this is becoming one of my favs!
Dreamweaver74 2008-02-08 ch 1,	abuseGee, if this is your idea of boring, I can't wait to see what you call exciting! This was amazingly good, and I loved the interplay between your Shep and Garrus...nude Garrus...drool
kosmokomik 2008-02-08 ch 1,	abuseThis was incredibly sweet. Touching story.
NChawk 2008-02-07 ch 1,	abuseWonderful story, very touching.
Chaosian 2008-02-07 ch 1,	abuseThis story was great, thank you for posting it.
FollowMeDown 2008-02-07 ch 1,	abuseMakes me smile so much. I love Joker's last line.

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