 GeorgeTobor 2009-10-29 . chapter 4Hope you continue this soon. |
 GeorgeTobor 2009-10-29 . chapter 3I'm glad you kept this side story. A Ranma without a curse just is not Ranma. And a Ranma without a gender curse is often only half a Ranma. A few stories do manage without a gender curse but not many. Part of the Ranma experience is the gender curse and its confusion and tension. Even those stories that have Ranma permanently a girl are Ranma stories because to the confusion, tension, and angst he/she is going through. The best stories usually leave the curse as it is in canon, perhaps with some level of control included. Though there are fantastic stories with Ranma as a girl. I really like the assertiveness and intelligence of Ranma in this story. Actually I find Ranma fanfics more interesting that the canon. And often better written too. |
 Rose1948 2008-11-15 . chapter 4nice! |
 Redzorin 2008-11-15 . chapter 4Nice freakin fanfic. |
 Dragon Man 180 2008-10-25 . chapter 4Nice chapter, can't wait to see Ranma and Herb have their transformed rematch where they both go all out! |
 Dumbledork 2008-10-25 . chapter 4Excellent new chapter. Really great to have two versions of the story to enjoy. This is pretty much the only interesting Ranma/DBZ crossover out there. |
 Wonderbee31 2008-10-23 . chapter 4Nice part here, and Ranma got his butt handed this time. Going to be interesting to see how he tries again, as well as how far Cologne is willing to try and push her claim, and just how long it'll be before Ranma gets fed up with them, and dropkicks her through the goal posts of life, LOL. |
 JustinD 2008-10-17 . chapter 3i vastly enjoyed this alternate fork of this story and as such, i hope that you continue to devote some of your time to continue down this alternate path till it reconnects to the main path of the story. |
 deathgeonous 2008-03-02 . chapter 3Time for a long reveiw.
One, this was a very good story. Two, you said that thiis was they way you origanlly planed on taking this story, and by that right, you should of just ingnored the nay sayers and cntinued on with this arc and not moved it to a side story. YOU are the author, so YOU decide how the story should go. Don't cave into presser. Althogh it is funny how you did so, as did Akria. Heh.
Presonaly I am very pro Ranmachan, and love to see that you finally included that aspect of the story. Hell, I'd love it if Ranma STAYED female, or at least went back to the normal half and half that normally goes on.
So my advice to you, and you really don't have to take it, for YOU are the author of this story, is keep writing this side story and DO NOT continue on the main story untill you finished the side stories POV. But, as the author, you can totally disregrad this idea, for YOU and YOU alone, are the author, thus YOU and YOU alone can decide what is for the best and what you should work on.
Thank you for writing this excelnt story, and to any who don't like the way you write it, screw'em.
Thank again and bye for now. |
 They call me Bruce 2008-02-12 . chapter 3This is one might be better. Can't wait to see where you go with this. |
 Redzorin 2008-02-12 . chapter 3Great freakin fanfic either way. Hope you pleased everyone. |
 Dracomancer1 2008-02-11 . chapter 3Yes, Yes, very nice. May i inquire as to the status of the other stories? |
 Rydan fall 2008-02-08 . chapter 3A legend reborn sidestory
A Ranma without the girl curse isn't Ranma.
Glad to see this version has it resort (even if it's temperal).
Hope it isn't.
If it isn't, will those spirits of Jusenkyo change the trigger? |
 Wonderbee31 2008-02-08 . chapter 3Nice,a nd still enjoy this a lot, almost wish Ranma had taken the flat of her sword against her behind thouh, LOL. Should be interesting to see how things play out later on for them in this arc, along within what is considered the main story as well? Again, good job! |
 Wonderbee31 2008-02-08 . chapter 2Again, enjoyed this part a lot, and will becurious to see how things go in the other section, though Nodoka still makes me wince at times, as she just seems like she wants so much to play at being the samurai wife, rather than really be one, much like so many people were twisted in the series as a whole. |