Looking forward to next chapters

Very clever. You're a talented writer and you've captured the characters expertly!

Ahaha! Good writing, but it seems your desire for less canon in portal 2 was not met. Sorry friend

Congratulations, test subject. You have captured my personality and feelings towards the rogue test subject flawlessly. You are undoubtedly the Enrichment Center's star subject and we are holding a party in honor of your tremendous success. You only have a few more chapters before completing the test. Do not fail now.

What can I say?

AWESOMEST.

GLaDOS in character, Chell... well, I really don't care about Chell, she not my favorite character. But I like Johnatan Stone and was really annoyed by Johnson.

GLaDOS best everywhere - in past, in present... Logical, smart, heartless computer with likely name and sweet pretty Curiosity Core.

I translate this story to russian. Hope they (...we, actually. _) would enjoying this story.

Thanks again.

This is a wonderfully written piece but there are three things I'd comment on;

1: Rather obviously, update! Writing can be a wonderful tool to focus your mind, an escape from the harsh reality of life. Look upon it as a tool for enjoyment and really lose yourself in the act of writing, you have true skill and potential, to a degree

rarely seen im the world of fan written fiction.

2: I'd be of the opinion myself that GLaDOS, in the game at least tends to make statements rather than conversation and while it is somewhat of a break from character, you've executed the conversational act of '[her] story' very well.

3: There is a Portal subsection here on the site, perhaps, should you continue this piece, you could transfer it there?

And I think I'm going to add a fourth and say, should you ever need a proof reader I am at your beck and call!

Thanking you,

Seán

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A-MA-ZING!

U really know how to tell a story.

Hooked. the only problem is that the last chapter was finished in 2008.

It's 2010. T_T

...well, besides the lack of updating (which I completly understand) I can't find a single flaw. You even keep everyone in character!

U...r EPIC. (and many times the dialouge made me lol. well done, android XD)

please update this? please? I like it!

she's like a child... I like how you manage to keep her in character and still provide an interesting and unique perspective on her personality!

AAUGH! NO! This story hasn't been updated in nine months!

Please don't tell me it's gone derelict...

This is easily one of the very best, best, BEST fanfics I have ever read in my entire life. You capture GLaDOS in an adorably menacing way during the flashbacks; her little encounters with Chell are also delightful.

I eagerly await the next chapter, if it ever emerges.

This is fantastic.

My gawd, this is amazing. You know, I learned something from your writing. I learned a lot of things from your writing. I can't quite put my finger on it, but I get the feeling that something's improved in my style. Thanks for that.

Oh, wow, and the scariest part of this is that GlaDos' voice and speech patterns sound *exactly* like a certain kind of Aperture Science Enemy robot.

I've never played Portal, but I've seen people play it and I've heard the song.

This thing you've written?

THIS IS AWESOME!

I'm new to the Portal fandom (having played the game only days ago) and I must say that this fic is pretty amazing. Unfortunatley, it seems like there aren't very many fics, and I'm glad you're writing this little gem.

I love how you're portraying GLaDOS. All her little comments make me literally lol. Can't wait for the next chapter!

I'm loving this story, the plot is excellent, and GLaDOS's back story is very well thought out. I hope you update soon. Peace Out!