Hey DigiGirl96 I was wondering if you were gonna update anytime soon. I've been dying to see what happens next, it's okay though take as much time as you need.

This is ridiculously overdramatic... What you described happening to Davis would not make him anywhere near that sick. A towel wouldn't freeze in five minutes, wouldn't melt in five seconds, and touching a living person would never actually be able to burn them.

It's kinda cute, but majorly flawed.

Love the story please write more I would like to see how it ends.

A fever of 125 degrees would kill somebody. (Heck, 15 or 20 degrees less would be enough.) Other than that, the story is very simplistic and brief; mostly dialog, with hardly any descriptions or explanations. And reading only one or two sentences per paragraph gets tiresome quickly.

you do realize that if anyone's body was at a temp. of 125*F/C they would be dead already, right? other than that, it's a good story. do continue.

Please update soon!

you need to continue...!

this story is interesting, but just so ya know, a fever around 105 is lethal.

Just so ya'll know... this is FICTION! F-I-C-T-I-O-N! No need for science here. It fake. No facts. Jeez. ~sighes~ You people are too factual! ~ways away annoyed~

Like the storyline, love the Dakari pairing. Update soon!